Huh. I just checked, and you're right, lol. It seems google failed me, since the last time I checked, it was "succubuses", not "succubi". Thanks for pointing that out XD

Well, she got bitten, for sure. I based this off the Amazing Spider-Man 2012 (film). This is the scene after Peter, or Petra let a theft escape and he shot uncle Ben afterwards.

Hope you didn't mind that Lucifer gendbend much XD

Well, I just mix comic and cinematic, so no Rogue going crazy, since I'm not too familiar with the whole situation. Just think of cinematic Carol Danvers with comic elements and my own take on her character and backstory while trying to make it not too complicated :D

Nah. It feels too much, so I tweaked it a little bit, as you might already read.

Nah. Not really fall in love. More like... don't mind exploring each other? As for the number of harem, 4 is just the cap. Honestly, I prefer 2 to 3. But anything can happen in the future. But no more than 4, that is for sure.

Correct if I'm wrong, but Carol used the moniker Ms. Marvel first, then Kamala Khan, right?

4 is like the cap for the harem. As for the quality, I mean it is focusing more on exploring the love interests rather than making someone falls in love instantly for no reason, hence quality over quantity. Also, for the 2nd part, think about it. What kind of harem would you prefer? The 1st is one that has women who will potentially fight each other to be the alpha of the harem, or out of jealously. Or this 2nd, where the harem can keep each other accompanied and make everyone happy because they don't mind swinging "that" way. XD

Quality over quantity, my friend :D

That'll be for the future events.

Dude, you are one of the few who comment every chapter. It's nice to know to have readers like you XD

Uh... what? Sorry, I'm not familiar with Warhammer, the 40K and the game one.

Honestly, I'm working on their relationships. If I'm to write harem, I'm going to limit to 2-3 girls, while trying to make the relationships believable? As for the Carol forgetting him, I kinda stick to the comic with that part. From what I researched, when she got her power, Carol black outs and turns into Ms. Marvel whenever there is danger and does what a hero does, and she pretty much has no idea about her other personality. So yeah. Mix comic and cinematic.

My take on Carol Danvers. Right now, she's not Captain America yet.

His suit and nanomachines will fuse with hellfire when he transforms. As for the separation like Rev-9, it won't. It just makes him stronger, that's all. As for Adam, let's just say he'll be Optimus Prime on steroid later on :D

Right now, Ms. Marvel. Just my own take and spin of Carol Danvers. I'll try and explore her whole identity-crisis-thingy in this story. Be warned: I'm writing as someone who is only more familiar in the cinematic verse than the comic.

Suit on hellfire? Of course it's gonna transform when he transforms.

Nope, not her.

I see. Thank you for the input.

Well, critics exist to help writers too. I know I'm not perfect, and there's you guys who fill in what I miss and get wrong XD