mistOrange

I think that the MC would take advantage of his system to be able to gain the skills of the characters in the movies, like John Wick, since he can gain skills from the system, but in the end it seems that the MC cannot see any use for the system, I think that if the skill points and the prizes didn't appear, the MC would have already forgotten that there is a system.

The most visible continuity errors are from the end of one chapter to the next, where at the end of a chapter he then goes to talk to someone, the conversation ends with a cue for the next chapter, but in the next one it starts with him entering the room and then there is a conversation totally different from the previous chapter! And in almost every chapter he does this, That why I said the story isn't bad, it just needs revision to make it better!!

This is a good example of a story that would be better if it had been revised, because in addition to the various continuity errors between chapters there is also the lack of a clear purpose from MC, but in general it's not good but it's not shit either.

Wow, the author was almost an Isekai author! Well, at least now you have personal experience to write another Isekai story.

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Po achei que o MC iria convocar o eco eco do desenho Ben 10, claro teria estragado a cena de batalha do capítulo mas seria o mais prático para ganhar!!