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Chance_No2mthPostedCompared to the last 3 stories you have done this is my least favorite. It feels like I jumped in the middle of a TV series becuase of the past lives he already had. Then those women and his kids/grandkids arrive and are basically thrown in his life and we don't even really get a how they met. Part of me honestly hopes you'll drop it and continue the last three works you did or something else.
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- Chance_No3yrReplied to EvergreenGamingCh 7 NOT A CHAPTER
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It will make since in future chapters I don't want to spoil but it involves two characters of the JL
"Today is a sad day for Gotham City residents, last night two influential family's are in mourning. One man by the name of Joe Chill brutally attacked both the Wayne and Dent family. Late last night the Wayne family had gone to the Monarch Theatre and had been brutally gunned down, Thomas Wayne was killed leaving Martha Wayne and Bruce their 14 year old son in critical condition, no further details have been provided at this moment. Judge Harry Dent was killed in car bombing early this morning on his way to Gotham Superior Courthouse, the materials of for making the bomb have been found in Joe Chills apartment, Judge Dent leaves behind a widow and son. The man that attacked both family's was shot by Officer James Gordon and sent to Gotham Hospital where he is also in critical condition. There are debates in City Hall for where Joe Chill will be sent, many feel that Mr Chill is mentally ill and must be sent to Arkham Asylum for treatment instead of the death sentence in Black Gate...." The news report went on. - Chance_No3yrReplied to EvergreenGaming
It's not just from saving her, everyone on the bus. Then the past also has a part in it.
"You are a pretty understandable guy." God said in a proud voice and continued. "And you are right you did good in your short life. Kind, caring, and compassionate with others..." He trailed off and made a image appear. "Those people you saved went on and lived life to its fullest. That little girl grew up and became a great doctor who saved lives and those she saved became great peace makers." The image flashed through multiple pictures. "So as a reward I will let you recarnate into a universe of your choice and 3 wishes... How about that." - Chance_No3yrReplied to yhwachCh 3 3. Unexpected Outcome