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CosmicSkyNet1dCommentedCh 50 50. Two Halves of The Same Lock- CosmicSkyNet6dCommentedHe drew his bowstring and reached his strongest anchor point as he loaded all his strength into the bow.
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Iâm assuming Jake will grow taller since heâs 16yrs old and in his growing phase
Jake looked over and saw his 3 droids all lined up on the wall under the window, R4 in his normal stance, Rusty folded up his eyes not emitting light, and Clank who was in a seated position with his legs splayed out in front of him. Jake realized how big Clank truly was, even sitting down Clank upper body easily covered over half of the window, which sat a on the wall around jakes chest level, Jake being 5.8 feet tall. The B2s width was also apparent as it's wide shoulders took up much of the entire wall itself. - CosmicSkyNet14dCommented"Allow me to speak to you in a language I know you understand" Jake activated his shock stick again and held it to his side.
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Ok, the chapter is ok but could have been better, my thing here is that the the entire feels kinda robotic and there isnât any life/ personality, the mc is just following his âprogramâ there is no questions about anything, he hasnât gave his thoughts about being in another universe, fighting in a war where he can potentially die in it, he just simply acts that he is another clone, not a man who died and reincarnated into a clone but just another clone. The writing is also another thing everything is undescriptive (imo) it doesnât write about what he does on his time on the cruiser or gave a description of what the mc see, feel, hear, or smell itâs just he gets on cruiser goes to admiral ask how long to planet â4hoursâ ok and then he waitsâŚsee what Iâm trying to get at? There is not description or text to put it short. Thank you
Ch 2 Entry log 2: Christophsis - CosmicSkyNet14dReplied to Scott47
Nice! found it
Phase 1 Armor [Image] - CosmicSkyNet14dCommented
Nice chapter, a bit short could have made it a bit longer. The mc really wasnât suprised and shocked about himself being reincarnated as an Arc trooper, he just took it like it was another Monday to which bothered me a bit b/c I hoped he would be in a dilemma about the whole thing but other than that good first chapter đ. Is the MC in with a Jedi and what does his armor look if you could give a description or picture. Thank you đ
Ch 1 Entry Log 1: The Padawan - CosmicSkyNet15dCommentedCh 48 48. A "Gentle" Spar
- CosmicSkyNet22dCommentedCh 46 46. Emi
- CosmicSkyNet26dCommentedCh 20 Chapter (20) Into the Dark
- CosmicSkyNet29dCommentedCh 8 Something In The Woods
- CosmicSkyNet29dCommentedCh 6 Still
- CosmicSkyNet29dCommentedCh 1 Witnessing A Miracle
- CosmicSkyNet1mthCommentedCh 5 5. Renting Cave_1
- CosmicSkyNet1mthCommentedCh 40 Bug of the Void
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I didn't add a bunch of information, so let me know if I should ad something or if I put one of them into an incorrect category. - CosmicSkyNet1mthCommentedCh 39 Plotting the Plotter
- CosmicSkyNet1mthReplied to Emmanuel_Capricorn
âA few more daysâŚâ
[IMAGE] - CosmicSkyNet1mthCommented
Washed over him*
Right after, a sudden chill washed over her.