The pacing is lightspeed, and it feels like there's no time put into developing the characters. You just say what they are feeling and put in a little authors note. An authors' note is a crutch that you should consider weaning off as it kicks people out of the story mindset. This ''mate'' romance feels entirely placed and not natural, and the sexual dual cultivation is very offputting personally. The mate thing is giving very abo which in turn makes the story read as a cheesy fanfic. I can understand the motivation for mates as he is a werewolf (at least partially), but with all the pain you have set up for this character to have experienced ''love'' would realistically be the very last thing on his mind. Healing himself mentally and stabalizing himself in the world he was thrust out of would be top priority. Also, just a personal gripe so feel free to disregard this last bit, but the whole virgin thing is gross and perpetuates that a woman's worth is tied to male standards of ''purity'' and objectification which is very toxic and untrue. This focus will potentially harm your chances of having a larger female audience, and stagnates Olivia's character arc into a hang-on completely dependent on werewolf man. Due to this I am sadly dropping this work. I was really excited with the premise, but there is only so much I can take. Good luck to you author, and I hope your writing flourishes with more experience :)

You have a pretty nice plot for the story author. I just really wish you can edit your chapters, and show rather than tell us readers the characteristics, actions, and background of people/places. I don't want to know that a character is arrogant, I want to see them being arrogant. It's not my place to harp on your writing, so this is just a friendly suggestion :)