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Alpha_Maymon1mthCommentedIs he a toddler??
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U mean she leaned forward right? If they’re facing each other when he tries to hit her chin, and she leans back…hitting the back of her head is impossible 🤷♂️
Daemon managed to cause some internal damage when he slammed his knee into her and while it wasn't life-threatening it was affecting her ability to fight. Daemon brought his foot up aiming to kick underneath her chin but at the last minute Serra leaned back; however, what she didn't expect was for Daemon to bring his leg back down upon the back of her head knocking her out. - Alpha_Maymon2mthCommented
Your use of “the girl” feels jarring, considering you just used her name. If u were rescuing someone who’s indentity was a mystery it would fit better. But going from Susan to “the girl” it’s like the character went from a best friend to a stranger.
After scanning all possible cameras, I found the car we were looking for on one of them. It was parked inside warehouse number "4", which was the furthest from us. The girl was most likely held there, in one of the utility rooms. Of course, there's always a chance that there's a hidden room inside, but I was hoping for less drastic measures of detention. Along the way, I had to mark each target, attaching a tracking beacon to them, to monitor the movement of opponents through the map. I'd have to keep a lot of information in mind, but I had to cope, no other way. - Alpha_Maymon10mthReplied to REALMSINUS
Qui gon doesn’t use it. If he did he wouldn’t have been as exhausted fighting maul in ep.1. He used Ataru with a focus on delivering power blows to utilize his large body. If he knew some makashi Obi-wan wouldn’t have been stomped by dooku in ep.2
2. Form II: Makashi (trainer: Jedi Master Qui-gon Jinn) for 100 points - Alpha_Maymon10mthCommented
He doesn’t use makashi? it’s either dooku or shaak tii who were the Jedi masters 😅
2. Form II: Makashi (trainer: Jedi Master Qui-gon Jinn) for 100 points - Alpha_Maymon10mthReplied to Willy_Tiono_6565
Coconuts to make horse sounds. Make the enemy second guess the numbers of riders coming
"I will Monty Python these wretches." - Alpha_Maymon10mthCommented
I’ve reached saturation of cliche
"Arthur protect the girls the big one is mine" Jon says venom dripping off his voice. The group can see steam coming off of Jon as he draws his sword and approaches the giant. - Alpha_Maymon1yrReplied to MEMES_R_gud
I thought her problem was she frequently forgets to charge her shields?
For a time they hated me for singling them out to make them perform said training assignments. As well as the severe punishments of conditioning given to failing said assignments, but I was damn determined to get the lessons through their thick skulls. While the entire time I was clinging to hope that I could change their fates unlike with Alpha Company. - Alpha_Maymon1yrReplied to Juhiko
I know, the Gif has similar spirit to it
I materialized a shirt over my body, a little trick that was quite easy seeing as how it was just a little modification of my Vibranium exterior to the texture I wanted and a touch of coloring. - Alpha_Maymon1yrCommentedWith the cigar in my mouth I approach, I hear, "damn bitch, I've been buying you drinks, and you 're not going to have sex with me, damn you think I'm an idiot, I'm going to teach you what a man is", he replies the blonde woman, "damn crazy, let go of me, don't touch me", the man replies, "I'm going to fuck you as no one has fucked you, damn you're going to feel until you like it".
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- Alpha_Maymon1yrReplied to Juhiko
Just toddler things
I materialized a shirt over my body, a little trick that was quite easy seeing as how it was just a little modification of my Vibranium exterior to the texture I wanted and a touch of coloring. - Alpha_Maymon1yrCommented
Aerions home improvement
"Harrenhal my love, a flight of fantasy turned into reality and the beginning of my very own home improvement journey. I am thinking about every little thing I am going to do to my sweet Harrenhal, she will be beautiful." Danny sighs and grabs my chin before standing on her toes placing a kiss on my lips. - Alpha_Maymon1yrCommentedAppropriately chided, Edmund lowered his head. His mind couldn't help but wander in awe at what Voldemort's replica might look like. It would be something that belonged in a museum, without a doubt.
- Alpha_Maymon1yrCommented
I feel the pain that those roof builders and masons will go through 😩
[The image that Inspired me] - Alpha_Maymon1yrReplied to BS6SC
Something like a halo spartan augments, well explored and easy to imagine. His soul already sounds better than most maybe just give him a ultility magical animagus form similar to Asclepius’s healing snakes 🤷♂️
'You will undergo a balance. Three sets of seven rituals,' Marvolo declared. - Alpha_Maymon1yrCommented
It seems like a bit much for a single glances description. How does she know that he always walks that way if she just met him? I’m trying to imagine him walking like a lion, is it lazy? Is he prowling? Some sort of predatory confidence? Maybe keep it short for later exploration in the characters relationship together?
The defined nose he sported complemented his prominent high cheekbones. Handsome in an understated, yet beautiful way. His strong, pointed jaw and wide shoulders spoke of his hidden strength. He possessed a latent, leonine power and always walked with purpose and a concealed sense of shrouded superiority. - Alpha_Maymon1yrReplied to NatetheGreat
Nah hes a narcissist, he only cares as long as Maegor doesn’t get in his way. Didn’t care about how his son would feel after killing his mother, didn’t care to ask his sons opinion on who he’d like to marry. Tried to gaslight his son an 8yr old to join the tourney( mc did archery instead), gaslighted his son(8yr) to tame a dragon 🤦♂️. I mean seriously the man is not doing this for his son, he’s doing it to further his own prestige. Dude groomed his niece then cheated on her repeatedly, this ain’t a love story it’s the tragedy of Daemons victims 🤪
Ch 20 Chapter 20: Year Of the Red Spring I. 120 AC - Alpha_Maymon1yrCommented
Being compared to the man who killed his mother and groomed his own niece… how flattering 💀
Corlys scoffed at my words. He turned toward Daemon, who was smirking, and then towards me. "Like father, like son. Fine, we will depart on the next moon, be ready."