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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q32713h
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    He was a Celestial Dragon, people who hold extreme power in the world government. Most of them were trash, but Itachi 'Uchiha' Morningstar was the biggest trash of all.
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    Itachi's Greatest Pirate System
    Anime & Comics · Platofox
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q32713h
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    In this memories he was a Madao, a totally helpless old guy or Middle Aged Dumb Ass Oldie. He was only 18, but he lived like an old man. (Reference Gintama.)
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    Itachi's Greatest Pirate System
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3271d
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    Ch 5 Chapter 5 Shadow Path
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    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3271d
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    no, this is the difference between the characters of the FF and the original)

    'This is the difference between the Righteous and the Demonic Paths. I can see why the former is so popular, despite the latter giving the greatest benefits'.
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    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3272d
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    I'll try to explain briefly if you need to read it. 1. MK. in some sense a person. not weak, has some kind of cheat in the form of a strange library in the brain, but the author poured in too much water that I can’t say anything good about this cheat, just something average. 2.His IQ is no higher than 120 and there is no point in hoping for anything serious, he is just average, this includes the same fact that he has no knowledge of the original story and is completely unfamiliar with other anime that will appear. in future . 3. By the time you read chapter 52, I don’t think that in the next 100 chapters you will have a harem or a romance, and if there is a romance, it will be something from the genre of cheap drama, because the author’s emphasis is more on that direction, to reveal the history and history of the world, although this story itself is hardly the same as in the original. 4. Enemy fights and hero growth are present and look better than most of the ff crap that is on the site, but since this is average, you shouldn't expect MK to be able to impress you. Each battle and overcoming something feels not like something you would like to read, but like something you are already waiting for and want to just skip this or 5 more chapters, you know in advance what will happen. I'm giving 5 stars only because at the moment I haven't found any adequate alternative fanfiction on any site. In reality it's about 3*. The personality of the mс, the author's hackwork over supposedly "Strong" enemies and other rubbish at the beginning makes you cringe. Don't expect much if you haven't read this work yet, if I were you I'd wait until at least 150 chapters are out.

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    Frieren: The Dark Mage's Diary
    Book&Literature · SrCuervo
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3272d
    Replied to Kuuhaku_28

    not only does he not know the history of the original, he doesn’t even know what anime is, and the author takes advantage of it, it looks so stupid.

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    Frieren: The Dark Mage's Diary
    Book&Literature · SrCuervo
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3272d
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    "I'll be back; I always come back!" Damian shouted as he fell off the cliff.
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    Frieren: The Dark Mage's Diary
    Book&Literature · SrCuervo
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3274d
    Replied to Yum_q327

    By the way, the idea is great, the pen is good, thanks for the work.

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    One Piece: My Crew Is Trash!
    Anime & Comics · Zaelum
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3274d
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    MC wants to seem smart and far-sighted, but I read everything up to the 40th chapter, only makes me doubt this. Although this is a comedy, it’s hard for me to imagine a person who would actually find it funny what was happening. MC is a pathetic loser who was always waiting for the accumulation of 3kk bellies for the first call and he got a kind and good partner, a little stupid and naive, but the only thing he does is insult her, although in reality, he himself is even more garbage. The whole story is based on the fact that MC is always trying to position himself as a victim of the gacha system, but if you think about it, without the system he is much more trash than a minor character.

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    One Piece: My Crew Is Trash!
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3274d
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    I don't like negativity, but judging by the personality of the MC, he is truly a useless piece of trash that floats in the TV clouds

    But Aqua's arrival disrupted all his plans, adding to his already scarce resources.
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    One Piece: My Crew Is Trash!
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3274d
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    why does he talk about intelligence, although he himself opened a restaurant, instead of killing a guy with an 8kk reward

    However, with Aqua's luck and intelligence both being poor, any opportunity ends up in a mess! The simplest analogy, she's the type to spend a billion to buy an egg! "You must be Zyhark, right? I've heard about it, don't worry, with this goddess here, you'll soon realize your dream of dominating the world."
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    One Piece: My Crew Is Trash!
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3274d
    Posted

    Good start, please continue. People come only after 30-50 chapters. GG does not look weak-willed, there is no backstory, but a couple of words were enough to understand her. The story takes place around the same time as the original plot.

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    Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3278d
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    I'm not a fan of crap, so at 30 chapters this is a good job. There is no beta ms, stupid ms, naive ms. Clichés or naive manipulations of the author. Stupid clichés and plot holes. The MC's silver lining is that he doesn't have to feed his GUs, making this ability more valuable each time the MC levels up. After reaching level 6, this ability should be fully developed and will only get better.

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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3278d
    Commented

    bless rng

    'lol… lmao even…' the 14 people that had failed prior did not find it as funny as I did, as the Windblade Gu was very common, and everyone here knew how to refine it without a doubt.
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3278d
    Replied to Yum_q327

    theft or politics. nothing brings more money than a monopoly on a large market

    2. If you were a Gu Immortal, what methods would you use to make money? I have a lot of ideas for that, some of which I'm sure nobody has thought of. But maybe you have better ones I've never considered…
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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    Yum_q3278d
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    Once production begins, time will be on the MC's side, every day lived is a Nkkk of primeval stones.

    2. If you were a Gu Immortal, what methods would you use to make money? I have a lot of ideas for that, some of which I'm sure nobody has thought of. But maybe you have better ones I've never considered…
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3278d
    Commented

    I don’t know which ones, but you can come up with something with this food cheat and break the world economy. For example, collect a lot of gu that produce in-demand materials, but their maintenance itself is too expensive to maintain them in large quantities.

    2. If you were a Gu Immortal, what methods would you use to make money? I have a lot of ideas for that, some of which I'm sure nobody has thought of. But maybe you have better ones I've never considered…
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3278d
    Commented

    one year closer to death

    So today is my birthday... yay, I am 22 now!!!
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3278d
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    "If there is one thing I hate above all else, it is when people have wrong reasoning but end up proving themselves right. It is as if someone said, 'I feel that the square root of 9 is 3 because 3 looks a lot like a 9 with a part taken out of it.'"
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    Reverend Insanity: Poison-Refining Demon Venerable
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  • Yum_q327
    Yum_q3278d
    Commented
    Light Beam Gu Rank 1
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