Hoping this one continues. Any updates, author?

Please stop creating new paragraphs when the same person is talking. If one person is talking, it should be in one paragraph. If one person talks, and then another person talks, a new paragraph should be started for the second speaker.

I must agree with the other commenters. Male character is a he/him, not a she/her. The translator/editor needs to enter the proper gender when editing.

Oh my! ❤️ Yes! She has arrived and stunned everyone into silence. Her presence is worthy of the title Queen. Both for Griven and for all witches. I am in awe of her strength as a woman. And we know she loves him. Her oaths to her family merely add to the foundation her and Arlan will have together. 💕

I knew he couldn’t be dead, but I NEED the explaination!! 😵😮‍💨🥹

Why is Muria (aka: Mureya & Ye Tianrui) suddenly being referred to as a she? The first chapter was very clear that he was excited to still have a certain male body part. Constantly calling him a her all chapter makes it difficult to differentiate between him and his maid. Please fix for continuity.

2 plus 2 equals…….. Come on Oriana! You are in for quite the shock [img=Loving it]

Oh, sweetheart… put two and two together. ;) You are his mate!

“But also smelled nice” … aren’t pheromones great? 😉 His body isn’t stupid.

I just laughed out loud. He walked into a tree! 🤣🤣🤣

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Oh my word! I laughed so hard!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Hunny, you have good instincts. Trust your intuition.

Got it. Slime ball. Great describing! 😆

Alex, you poor thing. You just can’t deny how attracted you are to her. Be her prince or her knight in shining armor. 😉😘🥰

Kazzen, I love your books! 🥰😘

Lol! Yeah... He’s in trouble. heeheehee😈

Aww. They’re so cute!!! He is adorable! 🥰