Christen_Chisholm1

I honestly can't believe it took me so long to update.

She is not their biological mother. She is their adoptive mother no children of her own.

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You know I actually agree with you on that. She know the Aldini brother's threw her father. I was in a mood when writing this. I am thinking about going in and rewriting or just going with it and make it better than how it started. I thank you for the comment and hope to do better in the future.

I take criticism well please dont hold back. I am trying to change up my writing style for the better. I enjoy writing but like other things in life, I can do so much better.

It was a from the readers prospective. I am sorry if that wasted clear.

Ah General Kanobi I've been expecting you.

when your mom so wack you and ya girl plot her destruction. I honestly was about to delete this from my library. I am glad I didn't because its getting so good.