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Daoist2402971yrReplied to JHeartCh 158 A Worthy Price (Ch.156)- Daoist2402971yrCommented
I thought she wasn’t head until died? And that was why she was killed?
This Qu family's shopping mall was developed after Qu Meng'er accepted the Qu family's position as head. The design of this Qu family's shopping mall was confirmed after she personally saw it. "Why is there a Qu family's shopping mall in this space? Why didn't the bamboo slip left behind by the previous owner mention this matter?" - Daoist2402971yrCommented
Ah…. I hope Torin rips him to shreds….
And at that moment, a voice Zariah had never thought she would ever hear again roared through her mind... the voice of Torin, Zariah's wolf. - Daoist2402972yrReplied to zeptaras
16? Feng Chuge(original) died at 10, FL replaced soul and lived for 6 yrs => FL's new age = 16
Moreover, the most ironic thing was that the real Feng Chuge, the first wife's eldest daughter of the Feng Family, died in the wild shortly after she was expelled from the house at the age of ten. The soul in her current body belonged to the number one killer from the 21st century. - Daoist2402972yrReplied to DaoistDFmEaR
Agree that it might be boring If they met each other early but that does not change stuff. Right until FL lost her phone, she was able to go online and see posts and such. And when the reason for plotline is just "because this would be boring " and no other reason, its just bad writing. If the parents were picked up first because they are on the way, then why isn't it told. Adding enough motivation and background to worry would make this clearer.
- Daoist2402972yrPosted
If you want to read a good apocalyptic novel, there are far better options. This book has several major issues and plotholes. 1. Plot: World building is minimal. The space is a catch all and isn't well described. The zombification isn't given enough detail. Does a zombie scratch make you a zombie? How do you kill a zombie? Are they slow/fast/blind or can they smell you? Zilch.Zip. Nada. Nothing at all. 2. Characters : All characters seem very one dimensional. FL: Ditzy at worst, naive at best. I am surprised that she doesn't try to check in with her parents and husband daily in an apocalypse. I feel like throttling her. If you lived away from parents/SO in the early days of the lockdown, you can probably relate. I assume that a zombie apocalypse woud be a thousand times worse. ML: ML sets out to rescue his wife, and ends up picking up her parents, and even random strangers before getting to her house. Even if they aren't close, this is pretty weird. 😒😒 Alternate suggestions if you like this genre: Coming of the apocalypse queen: on your knees young emperor Rebirth of the apocalypse queen
- Daoist2402972yrCommented"Shi Jin, Fu Xiuyuan is too much! How could he keep disregarding your wishes and forcing you? He is even forcing you to marry him today! Give me your ID and documents for safekeeping. If you really become his lawful wife, you will have a hard time divorcing him!"
- Daoist2402972yrReplied to Bookworm_123
Its actully true. High prolonged fever can damage the cochlea leading to hearing loss
She wasn't joking. The night when the original Mu Jingzhe had been thinking about ways to make love to Shao Qiyang, Shao Qihai's only daughter, Shao Bei, had gone deaf due to a high fever. - Daoist2402972yrCommented
I like her
"I say, are you guys more or less done?!" Xia Qinghuan couldn't bear to listen anymore. She put down her chopsticks and said unhappily, "If you guys didn't make that bet, would she have been pushed into the pond? Look at what happened now. You want to completely remove yourself? Let me tell you, Jian Ai is fine now. If she really drowned to death, you'll all be held responsible! And I've always thought that Jian Ai was the type to submit to adversity. Yet today, she asked Lin Yi to compensate her. I, Xia Qinghuan, really think highly of her." - Daoist2402972yrPosted
I read 40ch here and another 200 on MTL. Enjoyable premise - Setting is great. FL doee not have space cheat. ML is not omnipotent. But that's all the good things. FL does not trust anyone, least of all her own parents. This leads to a lot of things that can be avoided. Parents run around in vain before the apocaypse. Mom doesn't realize she has powers for 250 chapters 🙄. FL doesn't want to work with the base, which is understandable. She oscillates between wanting to kill her ex and his cousin and supporting him against a greater evil. So FL settles in a villa, sets up defense and hospital. Someone else enters and makes a base and she moves out after having to hold a guy at gunpoint to leave safely. 50 ch later, she's making a deal with the same guy (who also pointed a gun at her baby) to hold hostages in return for money. No security check, no guarding against the others who were plotting against her etc. At this point, it feels like author is adding plot points just to keep things interesting. There's a new haughty character with bodyguards throwing tantrums. The old ambitious woman is back to annoy lead. DNF, but YMMV.
- Daoist2402972yrCommented"Su Su, don't be afraid! Su Su, don't be afraid! I'll protect you! I'll protect you! Don't be afraid, my dear daughter!"
- Daoist2402972yrCommented
What a beautiful misunderstanding 😂😂!
He had not expected that. Although Su Su was quite concerned about Xie Qingyan in her heart, she did not want anybody to know about it. She did not even want to let Xie Yaoshi know about it... - Daoist2402972yrCommented
Err... why? More stupidity incoming....
She lowered her head to look at her watch. The time was December 25th. Su Su let out an indiscernible snort and turned her head to look at Li Xiaoyu. "I want to visit Bai Luoluo. Can you give me the hospital and bed number she's staying in?" - Daoist2402972yrCommented
I thought she wanted to hole up and wait now that its started. shes going to let her parents run around and get killed? O.o
The next morning, Su Su's parents woke up very early. After making breakfast, they went to the school to find her form teacher again. After going to the school for a few days, Su Su decided to go back to her school to have a look as well. She followed her parents back to the school and went back to the dormitory. - Daoist2402972yrCommented
Wow. is she a bit nuts?
She hung up the phone. Then, Su Su got up and took out a bread from the fridge. She sat at the dining table and enjoy her bread. As she thought about the problem, she stuffed the crumbs into her mouth. - Daoist2402972yrCommented
If only they knew her now ...
Nonetheless, in the eyes of every parent, they only saw the part where their child was wronged. The feelings of Su Su's parents could only be expressed with heartache, sorrow, grievance, and resentment. They thought Su Su was bullied until she had no choice but to pick up the wired mouse to strangle Bai Luoluo. Su Su did not even dare to kill an ant, so if such a matter could happen, her parents knew how serious Su Su was bullied by Bai Luoluo. - Daoist2402972yrCommented
Well....that sounds like more stupidity! They are going to learn that their daughter slept with a random guy anD tried to kill her roOmmate. So far this FL has been stupid, stupider and even a bit unrealistic.
Th next morning, Su Su's parents were fully armed and took a taxi to her school. Su Su excused herself because she was in a bad mood and allowed her parents to go to school to cause trouble. She wanted to stay home to continue her training. She would also wait for the owners of the liquefied gas canisters to send them over. Then, she would locked them all in the basement. Su Su had locked all the supplies she had bought in the past few days in the basement. Later, she would go out again and buy more supplies. - Daoist2402972yrCommented
Well, now there’s going to be police looking for you, so thats dumb!
It was not that Su Su had not thought things through when things happened. It was just that she had already thought it through. Although Bai Luoluo was out of breath and looked rather scary, as long as she was sent to the hospital in time, she could still be saved. At worst, she could just stay in the hospital until the end of the world came. At that time, Su Su would go and kill Bai Luoluo.