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man, rape is universally hated, but you corrected it, that matters, just try not to make the MC too despicable in the future, without harem, I think harem is a retarting thing, I'm not saying that it can't be mean, but I could have read lots of manga that I would consider badass if the harem didn't make a mess. I just think that you could bring a bloody story, try to bring the unexpected, I see a lot of romances that happen all bad with people around the mc or even the mc, but nothing happens to the most truly close friends, the person more dumb would understand that fate is helping the protagonist, there have to be ups and downs, eat certain that in these novels each milestone the protagonist may have difficulty, the problem is that he always overcomes and benefits, the real world is not so full of flowers. Don't go back on the strength of the MC, it's one of the things I hate the most, anyway, put more suspense on it, try to be different, maybe with that you will be really successful.

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