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Retro_Senpai

Retro_Senpai

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I do this for fun😂

2020-01-13 JoinedUnited States
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai6mth
    Posted

    Hmmm.... It's kind of slow paste, and a little bit edgy here and there. But it's alright, it has one or two spelling mistakes but nothing a little double-checking and editing can't fix. So far not much is known about the word, but it just started so it's understandable. Although I would like an explanation as to why the apocalypse started in the first place, it just felt a little rush if not too sudden. But seeing you have experience in creating Yanders just like your last book I have high expectations for when they show up. But apart from that author Good Luck, and keep up the good work.

    altalt
    Yes sir! I collect Yandere Milf
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai9mth
    Commented

    I'm getting srs Lloyd vibes from Cain

    It was at that moment, a devious smile became an evil smile, his teeth were in full view in all their glory, and he look menacing to the point even the devil would wonder what demon he work under, or what clan of demons raised him.
    altalt
    The Snake God of Pandora
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai11mth
    Commented

    I see Subaru RBD but with steroids.

    Ch 21 Laplace
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    My System is Turning Me Into a Yandere
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai11mth
    Posted

    Another one for the library cart for sure, A male Yanderechan lets go.

    altalt
    My System is Turning Me Into a Yandere
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Replied to Ero_Tenshi

    motivation loss honestly I want to come back, but the creativity just feels dead these days

    Ch 18 The Lolimancer Awakens
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    Re: Zero starting life in another world as an Apostle of The Demon God
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Commented

    Yes two authors are better than one after all, although we will have to stay synchronized for the verse lore to make sense, hopefully if God spears life this novel can reach the point we're everything can make sense.

    Ch -3 An important announcement
    altalt
    What!? Never seen a Demon King of Lust before?
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Posted

    This book is amazing I enjoy reading it, the grammar is alright, and the updated stability is good, overall I enjoy Asmodeus's personality a lot, and can't wait for more, please don't stop writing this, as I see potential

    altalt
    What!? Never seen a Demon King of Lust before?
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Replied to Retro_Senpai

    Sorry for the review fill with typos my keyboard is a bitch

    altalt
    I refuse to be maidenless but at what cost
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Posted

    Ok so I will give an honest review here, the grammar is alright, although there are one or two types, however, the way how the author starts it's off is typical and cliche, like most novels on this platform, what makes this book so special is the fact that hmmm how can I say this well let's just say I'm getting some getting black lagoon, Hellsing ultimate and Elden ring vibes here, but amazingly enough the author right it in such a way that you will fall in love with it instantly, and what I like about it here is probably the main character and also the author naming sense, and unlike other MC this one main weapon is well different for a high fantasy world like this, the main power source is simple it's like one universal energy and something else I won't say cause spoilers but it like jujitsu kaisen curse energy and the understanding of it, but the system is different as well, but overall what I like about this book is that well it hilarious as fuck, gore, cultured chapters, and my god the first yandere candidate seems insane, and i cant wait to see Mc who Morgan female form, and when i say their a lot lf sexual jokes there a lot, but the way its written superb I loveeee it in my opinion, the first chapter although cliche the way its was presented is what hook me, I see potential in this book so yeah its worth the read and lots of Yandere.

    altalt
    I refuse to be maidenless but at what cost
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Commented
    (A/N): A pick of the watchtower or how I imagine it to be.
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    A Loners Creations
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Posted

    I like Mythos and Yanderes what can I say, I do enjoy reading this, the start was unique as well, and I find it interesting that the mc is immortal and have multiple personalities, I also find it hilarious that his son is Hitler, but yeah Yandere Supremacy all the way, you should try it out there just something entertaining about this Mc.

    altalt
    Gifted: The boy loved by Systems
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Commented

    That would be a sin so unforgivable I can't live with myself if I drop that, I'm just taking a break from it, I plan to repost a new chap sooner or later though.

    Ch 1 Dying world
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    Re:zero restarting life in Monogatari
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Replied to Don_shofer

    Gracias mi amigo.

    Ch 1 Dying world
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    Re:zero restarting life in Monogatari
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Commented

    F

    "Former Prince Brutally Tortured And Killed!"
    altalt
    [ONLY ON WATTPAD] The Mob Character Shouldn’t Have a Yandere Harem?!
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Replied to Normal_ROB

    I guess but I feel the destruction capability when to awaken is on par with Excalibur Morgan.

    <Its the name of the sword spirit, it is said that Yukinomaru's power stems from the sealed soul of the queen of the giant race who is forever sealed in it, the sword itself is indestructible, while the sacred text written on it, was the trigger to awaken it true form>
    altalt
    I was reincarnated into a yandere otome game as a side character
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Replied to Normal_ROB

    Hahaha... I can't wait to write Yukinomaru in action, she basically a light saber as her flames will continue to rise and get hotter in battle to point even the flames start to change color.

    <Its the name of the sword spirit, it is said that Yukinomaru's power stems from the sealed soul of the queen of the giant race who is forever sealed in it, the sword itself is indestructible, while the sacred text written on it, was the trigger to awaken it true form>
    altalt
    I was reincarnated into a yandere otome game as a side character
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Replied to Normal_ROB

    Yeah pretty much, I feel like Gilgamesh's alien form should feel both horrendous yet beautiful.

    His entire body was covered with a black shadowy coat with hundreds of eyes that were glowing red due to his heat vision, while the hood was covering his face, if anything he looks like an eldritch assassin.
    altalt
    I was reincarnated into a yandere otome game as a side character
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Replied to Normal_ROB

    thanks will correct it

    <Yes, Kashira is stitching you out>
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    I was reincarnated into a yandere otome game as a side character
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Replied to Normal_ROB

    Yes, his only option after that would be Yanderecalibur or Archetype Yangire mode.

    Item synopsis: A spray that was created by a Yandere Alchemist to make other Yanderes except herself back off from her senpai, the spray itself only works on Yandere as any Yandere that smells it gains extreme nausea, and bowel pain, if they are 10 meters within your range.
    altalt
    I was reincarnated into a yandere otome game as a side character
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  • Retro_Senpai
    Retro_Senpai1yr
    Replied to Normal_ROB

    fufuf for all, we know Gilgamesh might have wasted his investment, of course, yandere in this story are very tedious and obsessive so of course, the spray will only work for so long.

    Item synopsis: A spray that was created by a Yandere Alchemist to make other Yanderes except herself back off from her senpai, the spray itself only works on Yandere as any Yandere that smells it gains extreme nausea, and bowel pain, if they are 10 meters within your range.
    altalt
    I was reincarnated into a yandere otome game as a side character
    Fantasy ¡ Retro_Senpai
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