Low_Strength
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Low_Strength2yrPostedAwful writing quality and a bad character. He hates unconditionally for actions that the character he directs his hate to has yet to even attempt. If you want us to hate the target, give us something to hate. Robert is a child in the beginning. Why skip 10 years when you can add interactions with Robert and MC, maybe changing Roberts character instead of just ignoring him. The MC is stupidly breaking connections with a possibly formidable warrior that could be a strong ally or subordinate instead of an enemy. Making the entire baratheon family an enemy isnt a good idea.
- Low_Strength2yrReplied to St_Pat
20 years of learning about the dark side, not of being alive.
While he had confidence in his sixty years of brainwashing, why take the risk. - Low_Strength2yrPosted
Feels very dull, like every other face slapping/reincarnation novel out there. “I’ll get revenge for you” or some boring shit like that. Acting completely out of character in the first confrontation. She had been bullied for years, and although I know nothing about the cultivation levels in this universe, I dont think an apparent 6 level difference is something to scoff at.
- Low_Strength3yrCommented
Looking for flaws?
Countess Miller watched everything like a hawk, scrutinizing her every move, finding flaws but found nothing. All her moves are precise with an air of sophistication. She didn't even look nervous at all and was calm through the whole ordeal. - Low_Strength3yrCommented
Switching from 1st to 3rd person a lot.
Nathan stared at the box in his hands and looked back at Nadia who was smiling wide. - Low_Strength3yrCommented
Saying “Undead Swordsman” is implying that the people that are having these thoughts, know that the MC is an undead.
He might have been a more brawn-over-brains guy, but being the boss and seeing all kinds of warriors has given him knowledge on such subjects. He can clearly tell that the Undead Swordsman wasn't Noxian, nor was he Ionian, and Sett can't help but be curious of where came from. Well, it didn't really matter to him. But, he had a feeling that today's fights weren't going to be so boring. - Low_Strength3yrCommented
“Translate” for your skelly boy.
He was unsure whether Aerion could defeat Khal Drogo in single combat or not without the use of magic. Meanwhile, there was nothing Khal Drogo could do in single combat against any one of his three undead knights. They would crush him with ease... but, then again, that was the craven's way out. Along with that, the victorious undead knight would be recognised as the Khal of the tribe (who could not even speak their tongue)... and not Aerion. - Low_Strength3yrCommentedAerion sent a large group of pirates to take the walls while he continued the charge through the city. A hesitant sellsword stood in his way but Aerion slashed through him with staggering speed. He fell onto the ground, the massive slash on his chest spilling blood like a fountain as Aerion walked past his body.
- Low_Strength3yrCommented
For 2 years
Before returning to Hogwarts, Tom looked into some company's that he could invest in. He has been promising to send a list to Alluk for a long time now. The problem was that his busy schedule just kept getting in the way. Also, Tom is extremely rich, so he isn't too worried about future money problems. - Low_Strength3yrCommented
I hope he doesnt do anything with the serum. I just hope he shows off his talent in magic. Im fine with some extra things from the MCU but he doesnt have to become another super soldier story MC.
Time skip September 1st, 1938 - Low_Strength3yrCommented
It would be “breathe” or “take a breath”
'I break a few kid's bones and now I can't even breath out of tone or the matron would start hounding me. Maybe I should just kill her? Nah, I don't want to be homeless if they close the orphanage because of her death.' He sighed and got out of bed. - Low_Strength3yrPosted
The amount of filler for the past 15 chapters is what annoys me about this story. I understad you are trying to show the mothers backstory and how the parents met and under what circumstances, but come on. 15 chapters could be condensed. I might star reading if its over but im more interested in the MC and ML than i am about the parents, no matter how much they pertain to the story developement.
- Low_Strength3yrReplied to CountWatermelonTM
Meaning its an invisible cloak. Like an air guitar.
With a bark of laughter, I flourish an invisible cloak as I take a bow. Upon straightening, I look to the Hufflepuff. "And you, Mr. Diggory, are exceptionally clever." - Low_Strength3yrCommented
Pot of greed? Its a good card to play.
"Now, it is my turn." Blood Duke throws his fireball at William which Black Templar simply charges ahead on, surprising the vampire. - Low_Strength3yrCommented
Cut him down*
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The play?
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Adjustements = Blessings
Since it was late afternoon, William decided to test his new weapons to get familiar, after a few adjustments of the bolter rifle, William patrolled the camp to see if there were any potential enemies in the area. - Low_Strength3yrReplied to Toonworm
It said earlier that she had a fast metabolism because of magic?
Lyca was not planning to lower her guard in front of a man who was hiding his true strength. After making sure that she looked pleasing enough, Lyca left her room and went to the back garden where Shen Qui was already waiting for almost an hour now. The back area of the mansion had a small garden and a swimming pool which Lyca loved. Of course, she doesn't swim— it would be too tiring. Instead, she asked her father to make an outdoor space where she could languidly lie and spend her afternoons while reading a book or sleeping. - Low_Strength3yrCommented
To sell parts?
As a thief, I used to steal a lot of gadgets and open them up to see what they were made of. And now since I have knowledge about electronics… Which is thanks to the intense study sessions I took with the help of my eidetic memory... recalling the technology of the future was pretty easy.