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Marek_Lapka9dReplied to Marek_LapkaCh 16 ⚠️⚠️Attention⚠️⚠️- Marek_Lapka9dCommented
Your story is good and even with minor dramatic errors it's readable.what kinda bothers me is ,based on titul of the story it's just Pokémon franchise that will be introduced in new world.its not like I hate it but if games like super mario bros,legend of Zelda etc.dont exist it would be banger if he later introduced them.
Ch 16 ⚠️⚠️Attention⚠️⚠️ - Marek_Lapka1mthCommentedCh 24 Chapter 23
- Marek_Lapka4mthCommentedCh 10 The Protector of the Forest
- Marek_Lapka4mthCommentedCh 46 46 - Inferiority
- Marek_Lapka8mthCommentedCh 115 115 - I'm Inevitable
- Marek_Lapka8mthCommentedCh 110 110 - The Elder Scrolls: Warcraft
- Marek_Lapka8mthCommentedCh 9 09 - Welcome to iCarly
- Marek_Lapka8mthCommentedCh 46 46 - Inferiority
- Marek_Lapka1yrCommentedCh 49 Revelations
- Marek_Lapka1yrCommented…And no, that is not me hinting that me and Harry got whored out. I think there was one guy who was interested in me like that, but when I was cleaning there he went to take a shower. Except when he turned on the water, he exploded! Well, the water did. See, apparently there was some kind of blockage in the pipes, so a bunch of water got stuck while the pressure just kept building. (According to the police inspector and plumber that is.) Then when he turned on the water that day, the pipes couldn't take it and the pipe burst. The force was powerful enough to send metal shards through the wall, through his eye, and into his brain! And thus I was possibly saved from a possible pervert.
- Marek_Lapka1yrCommentedCh 47 Kyoshi Warriors
- Marek_Lapka1yrReplied to Navy_King
Author I have idea for story One piece: Kyogre In this story will be MC transmigrated into one piece universe of one piece way before canon as god/was in of the sea and oceans Kyogre and create sea in one piece. It sounds stupid but it could be very interesting story.Considering that Kyogre is literally god/ess who created ocean and sea in Pokémon.So I though why not give on offl the strongest legendary Pokémon into one piece where 80 percent of the world is filled with water.I would let Kyogre MC shapeshift between human form as well as Pokémon form I decided it would be female because even thou legendary Pokémon are genderless I think name Kyogre sound more like name for female than male...So this is my idea I hope you will like it:)
Ch 88 Chapter 88 Madara Uchiha - Marek_Lapka1yrReplied to Marek_Lapka
I am irritated because in real life people dont call for example jesus christ by names like "the one who got nailed on cross" or "the one who got up after 3 days" you know.
Hearing this, Masahiro finally burst out laughing happily. "Hahaha, we can be saved! Thanks to the God of Light!" - Marek_Lapka1yrCommented
I am really irritated they are not calling him by his name.
Hearing this, Masahiro finally burst out laughing happily. "Hahaha, we can be saved! Thanks to the God of Light!" - Marek_Lapka1yrCommented
Why do they still call him god of light instead of apollo.They alredy know his name from poems and stories right ?
[Satoru: The God of Light sent me a message!] - Marek_Lapka1yrCommentedCh 47 Kyoshi Warriors
- Marek_Lapka1yrCommented
could aokiji x tsunade have daughter before main story ? Like their child will be same age as naruto, and in same classroom as him.People will know who her mother is but will not know aokiji is her dad (Because she was raised in secret in leaf village).In story they meet at chunnin exams in konoha like in original.
Ch 229 Chapter 228 Rejection (2) - Marek_Lapka1yrReplied to Zerou
How could jiraiya teach him when he is in war ?! Think man THINK!!!
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