It is a really good novel. I like it!

I love it. Well done, Author.

She will be in it. In a major way. But you just have to teust the process.

I didn't use kilgrave as an inspiration. I just wrote this chapter on impulse. The dinner was from when Beck wrote a poetry about her father and everyone in her study group liked it. Joe was planning to take her to an expensive place, but peach stopped them by calling beck to her. I will try to show it to you in the next chapters.

I really just wrote this on impulse. I know who kilgrave is, but i have never seen his movie. I just was writing this chapter then thought just to make annie kill herself in front of beck. But i just changed my mind and wrote this.

He is letting the girl PLEASURE her. That's it. And, i want you to know something. Even though he is a psycho like Joe and they fused, this is still an OC that i created. So there are some differences.

Let's just say.... he was a genius with 700 iq. Yeah, let's do that. It's not for plot purposes. I swear.*cough*

First let's clear up something. When i said he will not sire any vampire i meant he won't give his blood or directly transform someone. Alice is the first to be sired by his blood directly so she will have adavntages over the others while her sires will be better than other species but still weaker.

Then leave. Who cares.

He only sired Alice to help him. The others are sired by Alice.

Then, you're a psycho for thinking of such a horrible thing to do.😜😜😜

okay then, thanks

Thanks man. But i want you to understand. This book isn't about mind control. I just gave him this power in order to make a feasible way for him to control beck the first time. Other than that, it's just a psychological thriller that's concerned with the two people and how they will go about their lives with the previous events. Maybe read it for a few chapters and see if it's all about Mind control or just a book. But, thank you, nonetheless.

we will see.

I hope he looks like a psycopath. And, good sir, what is a yandere?

Just giving myself the first good review. I like this book. Please check it out and give me your feedbacks. I will try to release a chapter every two or three days. Peace out.✌️

sorry, i just wanted to get to the main story fast.

I understand your view. But, you don't need to be like the people that you're condemning. You won't change nothing but add more to the ugliness of the world.(I feel like i have become a grandpa at the end of his days when i am writing this)

Bro, a person's quality has nothing to do with race. Are the rapists in your country representative of your country or do they represent you? I am not even chinese and i am offended by your statement.

It will bro