Devilman389

They're good chapters, but there are things he did—the protagonist, yes, thanks to him, things didn't happen—and I would have liked to see the first reward being gold after the Alabasta arc. And if I'm not mistaken, but talk to the animals

The story is interesting, but there are some errors in the chronology that the author should correct. First, in the Naruto anime, when the story of Namikaze Minato and Uzumaki Kushina unfolds, we realize that Mikoto Uchiha, Uchiha Fugaku, and the Hyuga siblings are in the same grade as Minato and Kushina, just in different classes. Second, Yakushi Nono is two years older than the others.

Good chapter but I wish they would stop changing the characters' names, it's very confusing.

Finally, I had said a while ago that Eiji needed children since he's very strong and has no rivals, at least not that children give him a headache. Thanks for the chapter.

Hello friend, I wanted to know if you are going to continue publishing.

Good chapter, man, why don't you make Eji have a son?

It's good, but some things can be improved and things can be eliminated, for example the clones, which I think are unnecessary, and as I just read it, I don't know if I can still, but I voted for the harem. Although many do not want it, I believe that a harem in this type of novels where the character is very dominated is better suited to the harem.

I honestly don't think I need to change anything, but I would like to give you a suggestion which is that you should put more missions at least secondary ones.

Good chapter I'm waiting for more

buenas amigo era para darte una sugerencia que el próximos mundos que vaya sean make ki y sekirei mirai kara no okurimono