ViolentCloud
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ViolentCloud1mthReplied to Helios_SolCh 1 1- ViolentCloud1mthCommented'What are you?', he thought back on Holly's eyes flashing the same purple it had a year ago. It did not make any sense.
- ViolentCloud1mthCommented'What are you?', he thought back on Holly's eyes flashing the same purple it had a year ago. It did not make any sense.
- ViolentCloud2mthReplied to Ka1serMax
You are not very attentive, are you?
As the other students trickled into the classroom, Lucas couldn't help but notice Hannah and Susan taking seats not too far from him. The former's expression was inscrutable, her gaze flickering between him and the window with a hint of suspicion. The other students were also stealing glances at his desk and whispering. The rumours had started to spread. - ViolentCloud2mthCommentedIgnoring their presence, Lucas focused his attention on the front of the classroom where Professor Babbling, the ancient runes professor, was preparing for the lesson.
- ViolentCloud2mthCommentedAs they reached Dumbledore's office, the headmaster motioned for Lucas to take a seat while he settled behind his desk. The room was dimly lit by the soft glow of the enchanted candles, casting long shadows across the walls.
- ViolentCloud2mthCommentedhere is what a dementor looks like according to ai as compensation
- ViolentCloud2mthCommentedhere is what a dementor looks like according to ai as compensation
- ViolentCloud2mthCommentedhere is what a dementor looks like according to ai as compensation
- ViolentCloud3mthCommented
I don’t know why you make so many simple mistakes. In almost every single chapter there is at least one time where you wrote is instad of its. My guess is English isn’t your first language, so it’s fine to make mistakes. Just let chatgpt run over your text and correct these errors.
Ch 118 Chapter 118: A trail of destruction - ViolentCloud3mthCommented
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That’s all *that
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until it has been *inspected
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found *out that
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that *it’s dead
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*I can’t tell
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*It’s
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*It‘s
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*beast‘s
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*of its size
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