Ngl I don’t want to spread hate but this skill list and the gene are almost the exact same as bloodline system

Yo y’all is this story nothing but a porno or does it actually have more plot than sex scene like what is the sex to plot ratio because if it’s just sex with little plot I can’t read that ?

Hey I want you to know I’m about start reading your novel, but the main thing I want to say is don’t let other people tell you how to write YOUR story ok. Keep up the good work champ I wish I could write a story nice job man.

Idk this is weird the story is pretty mid and at best slightly above average idk why it has such glowing reviews but don’t get me wrong it’s not a bad story just not a amazing one

Ok honestly that’s not right. He’s the author and we are the readers he isn’t making a story to please us he’s making his story that he decided share I swear I hate people like u who discourage authors and not actually want to help them improve

YES IM HYPED

Oh my lord 😭😂

Hmm subspac huh yea I’l give lt ago I hope what you said about him not getting overpowered quick and is developed naturally is true

Hey I just want you to know I appreciate the story you are writing I’ve been reading story for a long time and I just love how you developed everything it’s a great read 😄🙂😌

I just love how he keeps making jokes that no one gets Pls never change I love this

I freaking love this story The author doesn’t need to add stuff like this but when they do ughhh it’ so amazing I just love every bit of it thank you for the amazing chapter

Not gonna lie I’m just loving the beginnin of this story I have very high hopes because it can only get better thanks for the great story so far !

I understand but any normal mom wouldn’t let their child go to a unknown place like that and again the whole world is so accepting and the mc is as well it’s just weird

Thank you for the great story

I’m Loving Sarah and Anthony relationship Thank you for the amazing chapter

Im just loving the development Of Sarah and Anthony Relationship God it’s Amazing

PFFTTT AHAHAHAH

Pfffttttt I love this guy man 😂😂😭

Lol nice

Yea I understand This is your first time and it’s Honestly good for your first just wondering If you are going to go back and edit or nah ?