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Yeah it would've😆
Why risk it?
This guy needs a therapist. And Bruce is absolutely correct with his decision to bail.
Hueco Mundo is practically an endless world with billions upon billions of Hollows...I'm actually shocked there were so little cannon Vasto Lordes, even with the tough conditions to become one.
Realistically, I can see the ability having a less sensitive passive mode and a much more sensitive active mode.
I'm not sure the process will benefit him. In the cannon it's implied that the Visored are stronger than their pre-hollowfied selves (and the average Captains), but every showing they've had proved otherwise.
I appreciate the feedback. Your right about this being practice for an original novel. Setting this story up in the Bleach universe makes so that I really can't see this story being more than 200 chapters. As I mentioned before, I'll try to find a comprise between the two styles so that I can get in the practice while still giving Riku the journey he deserves.
Thanks, I missed that.
Yep, I only noticed that in a couple of chapters. I have a comment or author's note to address that.
I really don't want to come off as whiny, but it's just getting hard to ignore.
This is getting a bit silly. The way that every character is so intimidated by this teenager is getting weird. Ancient existences like Selene, who we would think have seen it and done it all, seem to experience existential crises every time the MC looks at them angrily. It's just getting a bit difficult to suspend my belief.
It's been pointed out to me that marvel lore includes destiny controlling characters, so is this an AU without them or is the Ancient One just ignorant?
Going by how weird marvel more is, I wouldn't be surprised if there was some personification of fate flying around
I'm sure he could, he would just have to deal with all the alarms and traps that doing so will trigger. Oh, and old man Yama's big 'fuck-off' flames.
Thanks