I liked how the story was tolled and written. I am glad you wrote it, it was very good. Short and sweet. I like how if there was no evil what would there be to fight.

I love how it ended I am sooo happy you wrote this book. I made my heart melt for the characters. I ended perfect being so sweet. That group for friends, I feel will always be together!

Sweet, Sorry it has been a while. I don't know his limits but here are some ideas. You don't have to use them. Just say what you like and maybe I can go off of that. Over time he grows to want to become human. Or he got drugged into water and got trapped in a under water cave. Or he keep going on his own but there was always people after him because he was created and not born. Or he gets a curse put on him by a mage. Or found another like him but is different in power. Or he is strong enough that he just wants to live peaceful but can't.(doubt he would do this) Or he learns more about his powers and while in the forest comes across people that are in need of help. What will he do.

I love this story and how you keep going!! I like how he can change, it make it that much funner!! I loved the beginning and how he reacts to people! If you need help coming up with anything, I will be glad to help!! Hope you keep writing!!

Well I was very surprised about how many chip-chops there would be. I liked the story but I wished you could have told us more about the messenger. Other then that it was a good 5min. read.

I love how you added a backgroud story instead of having her alreadly there! It was fun to read!

Okay, good luck!

It is a really fun read! I Can't wait to see what her future will be! I hope you continue writing!! Though I wish they were longer but since you update so often. It is great!😎👍

This book! I just have to say it is amazing! I love the name that he has cosen for himself. The story line is great! I would love to read more! So please keep on writeing!