Looks good and promising but for now I will put 4 stars since I can't judge your writing style from 1 chapter.Anyway Good luck.πππππππ
Overall I would give 15/10 since it's the best story I've read in like a long while but even then really good job π with the characters development.
It's good so I'll give a 5 starsππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Good Story so farππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Dragonball X: The Ultimate System [Different Path]