From my first comment, your writing is 200% better man, great chapters, I always wait for the new ones

Mine doesn't either, I usually use Google Translate, as I said, the story is interesting and now that I've read the 9 available chapters I'm waiting for more 😃, I hope you have a good day and good luck college

Interesting story it has a great future but the author can improve in terms of grammar, these are not errors in themselves but some sentences with words placed in the wrong place, for example: "Affirmative 1 (one) It is possible to analyze and aquire there skills estimated time hour"

Hanma bloodline

Liv Parker, Hayley

Divine Reflection (神かみ虚うつ視し, Kamiutsushi): As a man designed in the image of God, Adam was gifted with the ability to perfectly replicate any move and technique he lays his eyes upon, including the ones used by divine beings. Regardless of its speed or power, Adam can evade any attack whilst simultaneously countering his attacker with their own move. This ability was so incredibly potent that Adam was even able to copy and utilize Zeus's time-surpassing punch after only seeing it a single time. In the anime, Adam can instantly morph his biology in order to replicate attacks properly, such as when he copied the Serpent's attack: his hands grew three times in size, gained black-green scales and sharp bone claws.[4] However, despite their seemingly unbeatable nature, the Divine Reflection do have their limits; seeing through his opponents attacks puts a certain amount of strain on Adam's nervous system. If Adam pushes his eyes to their limits, he will start to overheat and if Adam chooses to continue he runs at the risk of becoming blind (bleeding through his nose, eyes and ears in the process), making him incapable of using Divine Reflection. (Wiki Record Of Ragnarok - Adam power)

Mano fale q tu foi curtir o carnaval e esqueceu o capítulo

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milf +1

Man, you don't know how good it is to have someone with the same opinion as mine regarding most ff.net fics, sometimes just looking at the synopsis... 😔 I already think this person is not normal (Google translator)

well... I'll stick around for 5 more chapters to see how the story goes but there's a big risk of dropping, you're a good author man but the idea isn't for me (Google translator)

In my view I think it's kind of unnecessary, this only ends up complicating the plot more, running the risk of having holes in it. But the story is cool. (Google translator)

if a protagonist became my enemy, I didn't want to have him in armor. the author must have had the same thought (Google translator)

I'll drop this story here, hope it continues, but it's not for me (Google translation).

Bleach Youruichi e Tier

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