Thanks please have some power stones and I hope you add some more chapters soon

Please add more

Please add more

Thanks

Thanks for the chapter have some power stones please add more soon

Please add more chapters

This is good please add more chapters

How about instead of the new world they end up in tensura

how about emerald god form

Please add more chapters also have three power points

This is a good story please add more soon have three power stones for the story

Rewrite it good story

How about being able to bring meteorites down from space like marada uchiha did since that could work with that path

I think he should be active because the story is so post to be about him and if he is semiretired it would be alittle boring

Good luck at the new job have three power stone to congratulate you also you might need the make the fighting type a boy since most fighters are guy s

That is a good chapter please add more soon also have three peer stones

Maybe for the fighting type you could make him abit like rock lee you know burning with youth

How about they end up in monster musume to relax and for some comedy not many people do that place so it would be alittle more original and funny becuase he is half human

I think you should go to danmachi world next to get stronger and more experience fighting different monsters

1+ you could make a really original story if you do that and you don’t have to follow canon and do the story your way