andromedasnow
Geeky bookworm with a wicked personality. 😈Shoots, frame & get the hands dirty.
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As the story goes, it is well written and it develops well albeit slowly. However, there are things that strongly gave me a sense of deja vu. I am only at chapter 130+ The similarity in one of the books I read was too close. And these kinds of stories are really too expensive. I can get a well written, original paperback for the price of 250points. I’ve already spent $15 and they’re still in the farm faffing about. 😐
“mummy SAYS WE’RE going to see the lights…”
“Good night mummy’s darling son, I love you”
“go it” << what the heck is this?
“arranging the items, he…” missing punctuation mark… 😒
The story is good and the main characters are loveable while the villains are hateful. It seems it’s a very popular theme these days… Broken family, misunderstanding, miscommunication , wealth… Further editing should be made before expecting readers to pay, these things are more expensive than actual books so we readers deseve better. So many mistakes: spelling, grammar, actual words used in wrong context. I hope the further I read, the better it will get.
He is incredibly stupid. Only torture without interrogation ? Ugh.
Reading up to here. Dang! Author, can you please edit your work properly ! The grammar is bad.
Confusing. Wrong character.
What the heck? Is this one also a plagiarised version? Names aee changed?!?!?! If it’s not an original version, I WANT MY MONEY BACK!
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*residence