The story is from multiple perspectives introducing side characters as well as people connected to the male lead. This allows the reader to become more invested and knowledgeable about the world and the people in it. While there are a few points where their emotions seem to be dulled when you would expect more of a reactIon, i believe this does not detract from the story. In fact it is only specific characters who have this happen so it may be built into the characters. Very easy to follow transitions and well written. The world building is spectacular as well. The chapters are quite long, which is very nIce. You could probably split each chapter in three to make up a normal chapter in other posted stories. Overall a good read.

Wow, left her just like that. His love was so brittle, and now she has to struggle alone with the loss of her unborn child and her first love. Is this to highlight his transition to a darker state of being?

Its so sad, he doesnt know about her or the baby

I love her powers, such an amazing idea That was explained and shown off beautifully

Great chapter

Whats their motivation to participate in the tournament ? Do they have to do it, do they win something? Loving the story just had a thought

I love the level of detail

Awesome

Um, why are the parents knocking?

I dont think a Three day old baby should be off by Itself in a room. I suppose they will have a maid accompany the baby but sheesh If i didnt have a way to moniter the baby no way iD have it anywhere else

If you got it, flaunt it. Unless your trying to hide from Assasins!

I mean he only met them three days ago

I mean if its not gonna cause a lot of pollution and its literally all around in vast quantities . . .

Lol selfish trait