Katmulla

Is she the girl he saved? Did she die after him?

The world description is lacking at the start, if cultivation and martial arts were described as more prominent I feel a lot would have been less startling. Also when introducing the characters I feel if there were more prominent features describing characters it would make them easier to flesh out in my mind? But my main complaint is translation and editing quality. It’s hard to read because my mind is constantly pointing out mistakes when a word is used wrong or a sentence sounds wrong. The story was great for what I have read so far, I love the concept. I will definitely come back and continue if it gets a good edit😎

Great so far, can’t wait for the next chapter!!

Ah he made her feel bad about the compensation they got for his death by blatantly saying all it takes is some compensation and you’ll let anything happen to your kids

The story is from multiple perspectives introducing side characters as well as people connected to the male lead. This allows the reader to become more invested and knowledgeable about the world and the people in it. While there are a few points where their emotions seem to be dulled when you would expect more of a reactIon, i believe this does not detract from the story. In fact it is only specific characters who have this happen so it may be built into the characters. Very easy to follow transitions and well written. The world building is spectacular as well. The chapters are quite long, which is very nIce. You could probably split each chapter in three to make up a normal chapter in other posted stories. Overall a good read.

Wow, left her just like that. His love was so brittle, and now she has to struggle alone with the loss of her unborn child and her first love. Is this to highlight his transition to a darker state of being?

Its so sad, he doesnt know about her or the baby

I love her powers, such an amazing idea That was explained and shown off beautifully

Great chapter

Whats their motivation to participate in the tournament ? Do they have to do it, do they win something? Loving the story just had a thought