Wheels_n_Tails

This story had the potential to be quite good. Main thing that turned me off is the age of MC. MC is 32 transmigrating to a 12 year old, which in itself is fine. However, the author doesn’t seem to keep this plot point in mind through the MC’s interaction with the male lead but also those around her. During their first meeting MC was able to physically interact with ML, to which it was commmented that it was the first time ML allowed someone of another gender to interact with him before. Again, keeping in mind their age…ick. In addition, MC’s interaction with townspeople makes no sense. She’s able to buy a clothing store and the shop owners trusts her unconditionally? Again if MC is 32, and appears as such, find…BUT SHE’S 12! Another issue is the development of the characters. ML is portrayed as someone who cares about his soldiers and is willing to sacrifice himself for them. After MC takes care of assassins after ML, it’s acknowledged ~8 men died already. The ML doesn’t even try to look for their bodies/bury them. ML is a general in the military, he obviously has responsibilities, but why is he spending months with MC in the middle of nowhere?!? Even if nothing happens to him, he’s still abandoned his responsibilities. TLDR: characters are underdeveloped, plot is incoherent with no goals mind, and information is inconsistently followed/makes no sense. Honestly it’s a pity because I really wanted to enjoy this story. I think the premise holds a lot of promise, but again there’s no plot and characters are confounding

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