ty author I have enjoyed this story thus far. I found your story a couple days ago and have already read through to this cliff hanger of seeing it has not updated in 29 days.... I hope your not feeling discouraged as I believe you do have great talent in writing. yes there may be what you feel are mistakes that happens in all endeavors its part of the further molding of you as an author. Also do not let others dictate that what you wrote was bad or not up to some imagined bar of quality,if you are expresses the thoughts and ideals then your doing right as writer. now im not saying ignore when your feeling trepidations while writing but take those as signs leading you to change or flesh out a detail, its a road sign advising you of a turn ahead not a sign saying dead end. well again ty very much for your story Mr author and I hope it continues soon. p.s. your use of lonely a few chapters back was off. the proper term to use to say he isn't the only one of his kind would be alone. you feel lonely when your alone with no one else around. I hope that helps some.