I don't understand what he was suppose ta learn from all that? I don't think it was control bc he already has it and only wants Jane. but still happy for the update!

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but why would he need ta know allllll this? how is this training him and helping Jane?

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ooo is it the red devil? or a new character? I'm so glad he getting stronger but he need ta hurry up and go help Jane, she still has alot to do..smh

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ughhhh my heart hurts so much!! I can't believe this happen to Alicia, and poor zeres. what exactly is zeke gonna do that requires all this sacrifice and that Alex couldn't handle himself?

wow I did not expect that, that's crazy and Jane can take out both of them but jus how much more crazier is each portal gonna be? and still no sign of the general?

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omg, wats going on for the amazing Jane to be like this? I honestly can't believe they got her ta sleep some and forget the mission. then what is this about a "sexy and familiar" grunt?? why would anyone sound familiar in there??

soooo glad to hear the story continues!! thanks author! but can anyone tell me how I can read the creator's comment fully? I only ever can see a sentence or two and can't figure how to extend it to read it all.

I think she could deal with them all at once bc she's amazing but I understand she lacks experience. maybe that red devil could help encourage her tho.

did the general return?? or is that the kid? Jane is so awesome but now how is she gonna visit her 3rd boyfriend?? he's lonely.

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heeyyy author, jus checking in on ya. hope everything is ok bc there's been no update and no word from ya.