I can’t read the whole last section of this chapter it’s like blacked out. I’m loving the story though keep it up

You should always follow your heart when writing and worry less on others opinions because you write just as much for yourself as others

Liking the story so far. Only thing is I’m not a big fan of the Y/N but besides that looks interesting

And it could introduce a little anguish/ hope with the aspect of the prophecy of 7 deals with the doors of death being held open

You could do a very interesting move with Zoe Nightshade. Both are children of Titans and from ancient times

Are you going to include romance?

I don’t think I have ever seen a Helios demigod before I’m very interested in how this will play out

I’m loving the story

I love the story always wanted to read a kcd story

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I‘m loving the story! I’m leaning to him being a son of boreas the god of winter and ice?

Absolutely loving the story! The concept is really interesting and unique! I cannot wait for more

Is Percy going to be In the story as well?

Okay a linebacker position is super interesting!

I would have him as the manga version

I always was a fan of Josephine so I vote for herxmc

I honestly think you should have some sorts flashback that does not have to be very in depth but it would help build a timeline to your story and help introduce your plot more if that makes sense

That was one of the things that made inquisition weird is that he was very in the shadows kinda thing. I love the idea tho ugh

*Flashback to what happened