Rebekah and Leah are me.

Peace be to you and your household human. Repent of your sins dear christians brothers and sisters. Repent of lying and stealing and hating and greed and lust and murdering and sex immorality such as adultery and fornication and gay and lesbian ness and beastiality and masturbating and angeliality which is following after angels to mate with be they in the form of aliens or not. Repent of your worship of money don't take the vaccine and accept to live by faith. Repent of watching worldly tv shows and movies and musics. Repent of not teaching the gospel and not letting others know you are a christian but trying to blend in. Repent of not praying in the closet but in public. Repent christian women of makeup and wigs and weave and immodest dress. Repent Christian men of the above as well. Repent christian children of not being obedient to your parents unless they are telling you to do wrong like take the vaccine or lie or steal or hate another human. Then pray to Jesus for help. You too human women for your husbands and jobs and men for your job and pastors repent of obeying man and not Jesus. Don't take the vaccine. Repent of gossiping and fearing the future. Confession your sins to Jesus. Forgive others of their wrong against you so you can be forgiven in heaven as well. Be joyful that the 7 seals of revelation has not just been open. Love others as your self but love Jesus Christ more by not taking the vaccine or supporting false religions for all other religions besides Christianity and Judaism is false. Repent and forgive others.

Solider life is hard. I too am in a army.

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It was a lovely story. I like the fact it seems like a mystery. It has a chance of being great. I look forward to it's finish. I plan to keep up with this story. Hope the author continue and maybe sell it on amazon kindle in the future to make money.

Thanks. You too my friend

I don't really like the genre of the story but the author writing style is very nice and thus i can't say much more then this. Give it a try if you want to read about magic and king Arthur. Or interested in British folk tales.

Well I will be a bit shameless. This is a great story. Thank you all who reads it. I did my best in writing it. If you notice any spelling or grammar mistakes please point them out. Thanks a lot. Have a good day.

me too. I am glad you like it.

Oh my goodness that queen. Is she a step mother? What kind of mother would do that? So sad?

what?! The poor princess! Run princess! Run for your life.

Okay the plot looks promising. I can not wait to find out what the reason the heirloom is acting up. Keep it up.

you are welcome.

Thanks all who review and comment

*can review it back

Thanks. What is your story name so I review it back?

Could you write one of theses from the male pov? I thought that's what this was. Also please review my novel "The midnight killer in another world."