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Kloe_Lang

Kloe_Lang

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2019-12-26 JoinedCanada
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang1yr
    Replied to Slippy_Sam

    I feel like while yes, there isn't enough dialogue, in order to see his personality, you can look at his actions. Spoiler alert. For example, instead of murdering everyone like I've seen so many mc's do, he instead decides to help them. He and the ants help improve the city's they take over and have a sort of symbiotic relationship. Instead of destroying or ruling over the cities in an tyrannical way, they make the lives of the people better.

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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang1yr
    Commented

    Thank you! :D

    Ch 137 Reencounter Amidst An Intense Battle
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    Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang1yr
    Commented

    Yay!

    Ch 137 Reencounter Amidst An Intense Battle
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    Brand New Life Online: Rise Of The Goddess Of Harvest
    Fantasy · PancakesWitch
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang2yr
    Commented

    He is not a sociopath, but he is definitely not mentally stable and should probably go get some help.

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    I Will Conquer The World!
    Fantasy · DemonsDescent
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang3yr
    Replied to Kloe_Lang

    Please don't have too many cliché situations, although having a few of them would be okay. (If you can, that is. This is just a suggestion as I find cliché situations a lot in Webnovel and it's gotten annoying and boring.)

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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
    Games · NightWind
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang3yr
    Posted

    So far, this book has been really good to read. Although the Main Character of this story is ruthless, he's not completely heartless so it makes the Protagonist more realistic. The writing quality is good as there seems to be few grammar mistakes, and has stable updates. The world background is slowly being revealed, although there are mild info dumps, it's to expected for a character who's been reincarnated and knows a lot about the present and the future. The development of the story is good, as so far there aren't too large time skips, and the story only skips parts of the Main Characters life that wouldn't be interesting to read. Even though I've only read 24 chapters, so far this book and the quality of this book is good so far. (I just realized that I made a whole paragraph on a review for a book. Oops... Lol)

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    The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage
    Games · NightWind
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang3yr
    Commented

    Is it bad that I didn't notice the resemblance until now but the baby did?

    Little Melon's eyes sparkled, he instantly ran to the bed and climbed on top of it. He pointed at the plushies, "Momma! Look! Dada, Momma and Mello!"
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    The Devil's Sleeping Beauty
    Urban · BerriApplepi
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang3yr
    Commented

    thank you for editing your work! 😁

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    ELECTUS - A tale of Peaceful Demons.
    Fantasy · MisterE05
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang3yr
    Posted

    There hasn't been much to read yet, but so far the writing quality is good. The character design is also good so far, as the MC acts very normal and seems to have normal feelings in this story.

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    System: King of Monsters
    Fantasy · UnseenLurker
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  • Kloe_Lang
    Kloe_Lang3yr
    Commented

    That is one scarryyyyy trial. He's smarter and stronger than he seems.

    Ch 156 Passing The Trials
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    The Ancient Genes
    Fantasy · ReincarnatedSaint
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