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This story is nice, but some parts have been bothering me a bit. I feel like our MC, Veronica, is actually loosing her spot as the MC. I get what you are doing, but I will have to say this, I don’t really like Ervas(he just feels like a 1:1 copy of Van from Death Mage, he just looses my interest immediately, Veronica on the other hand! She’s interesting to me, I’d much prefer, if she were to take center stage a lot more...hell, I’d be alright with separation or something, throwing Veronica into an another continent or time or whatever, just letting us have a Demon Queen reborn as living armor be the main focus point)