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autumn_spring2yrCommentedHow can she be responsible for your insult? you hurted her the first š¤š¤
"Tara I will not forgive you for this insult" she thought in her heart and her fist clenched automatically.- autumn_spring2yrCommented
I feel pity on mohit to be married to girl like srushti, who can hurt him but doesn't want to hurt her jiju. Does she even know this, Her relationship should only be important with her husband and to his parents...rest of them doesn't even matter. This is really frustrating
Ch 93 Chapter 93 - autumn_spring2yrCommented
Does she have a brain?
" But I can't refuse Jiju. He is like my elder brother. " - autumn_spring2yrCommented
you're the most dumb one... your husband is important for you or your jiju?? grow up srushti, you are spoiling your own home
He had just eaten a few bites. Maa called after him as he had not finished his breakfast but he said he was not hungry. Why does he take out all his anger on his food? He doesn't take care of himself. - autumn_spring2yrCommented
That's so frustrating, Maya and Viraj, they are truly showing how to break marriage. What does they think of themselves? They should leave Mohit and Srusti, let the couple solve their own problems... who are they to interfere? its irritating to even read how they behave? What's wrong Mohit has done? what choice did they left to him? nothing and now they all blaming him for not sharing the truth. Mohit should teach a lesson them
Ch 90 Chapter 90 - autumn_spring2yrCommented
You stay in your limit blank head
" She is going with you but that does not mean that she is back with you. Just stay in your limit," jiju said glaring at him. - autumn_spring2yrCommented
Why don't you leave your hubby like the same way you are asking Srusti to live without Mohit and Stay at your home because your kids miss her... See what you are even speaking š¤š¤¬
" No, Dadi !! We want to have Srusti at our home. Kids are loving it. They wanted to stay with their Mami. " - autumn_spring2yrCommented
Not an actor but an blank minded idiot
I looked at di and jiju they were trying to hold their smile. Jiju was an amazing actor. - autumn_spring2yrCommented
I want to pull my hair, they are so irritating uneducated couple... Your brother sacrificed everything and this what you are doing to him. š¤¬š¤¬
" I know... But he has to face the music. As it is, he loves music. You have a date with Sujoy the day after tomorrow. " - autumn_spring2yrCommented
I have never seen idiots like these two who are just hurting Mohit endlessly without any reason
" I love you too. And even that idiot brother of yours. But he would have to pay for hurting my little sister. Srusti, ignore him. And that date with Sujoy is still on..." - autumn_spring2yrCommented
what an irritating person he is, aren't you all hurted him š¤¬
" See, I forgive him. You are right, finally, he told us, we must consider that. But that idiot loves to do acting... Let's show him our talent as well. Do as I say... Let's not get him off the hook this easily. He needs to chase you and propose to you again. " - autumn_spring2yrCommented
You are the dumheads who are calling him idiot, You people closed your minds not him š
" You know what Maya, that idiot did at least one good thing in his life," Jiju said. - autumn_spring2yrCommented
From where you are coming from ms. dumbhead? you people never accepted the your brother and now you are expecting him to come clean. You are an hypocrite
" He should have taken care of your emotions as well. " Maya di said. - autumn_spring3yrPosted
Hello Author, you have so much potential and story background is good but I couldn't able to got connected with story and characters. Many things including dialogues which I read in your stories, was unnecessarily added, not all the minute details are requiredwhat they do or where they go everytime to add as it will only make to loose interest or to skip the chapters. A character need flaws in it, but I find your female lead too unrealistically perfect in your books, which makes it not able to even connect with them. Kindly think of this review as an honest feedback of the reader of your books. I do wish to read stories written by you in different style rather than how it's being presented now. All the best for your hardwork and future books.
- autumn_spring3yrCommentedCh 1 The Calm Before The Heartbreak