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Daoist807847

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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078475mth
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    sing or sign?

    "Your welcome." She smiled looking at the hickey as if it were a piece of artwork. "There you go, a sing that you are already taken. So unless they don't want to die they'll keep their distance." Her possessive voice rang through his ears like a sweet melody.
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    President's Pampered First Love
    Urban · lizmorgan
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  • Daoist807847
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    the other brother's name is it James or Jason? I'm quite confused

    Bae gulped when she felt her sister-in-law's glare. "I- ahem I forgot to tell you that I invited my brothers for some quality time," Bae told her guiltily. She wanted both Jason and Aiden to make up after their fight at the party so she had invited both of them over. After what happened with faith she had forgotten about them.
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    President's Pampered First Love
    Urban · lizmorgan
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078475mth
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    too tired to rease because there's no paragraph in this writing 😞

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Catching Adultery
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    Domineering Mr. CEO and His Impudent Love
    General · Lu Qing Yun
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078475mth
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    there is no paragraph in the story.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Calculation
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    Daddy! Come Home for Dinner!
    General · Like Dawn
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078471yr
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    sawing is to cut things in to two using saw,

    Sawing the Colonel standing still without saying a single word, Lt. Gen. Haric continued, "Arias, I treat you as my son. I even favoured you more than my own son and put trust in you! How can you doubt and question me just because of a drunk talk?"
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    Falling for Miss Captain : LOVE vs DUTY
    Urban · Pearys
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078471yr
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    lamb chop đŸ„© not lamp chop

    Feng Xinying took a quick shower and went downstairs to have her breakfast. She saw that Xie Yuansheng was already there on the table talking to his mother. They looked at her and his mother smiled. Feng Xinying pursed her lips as she sat down opposite them. Quietly she picked her fruits and lamp chops from the table and started eating.
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    Sugar and Spice: The CEO’s Feisty Wife
    Urban · MishaK
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  • Daoist807847
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    Qiao Jing, Qiao Ran and Qiaou Yu. which one is the real name of the character

    "I didn't mean it that way!" Qiao Jing's brows furrowed even deeper."Xia Ning, can we be reasonable and make things clear?" she asked.
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    Forced Marriage VIP Front-Seat: My Superstar Ex-wife is very Popular
    Urban · Clear Sky Dance
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078471yr
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    dear writer... all along the stories, i can figure out you are confused in using words like, show, watch, look, see and other words with similar meaning. please.... revise back

    Everyone showed it but no one dared to stop her. They just watched silently but before Sara could trim her dress, Siara scratched her wrist harshly making it bleed. Sara immediately left her hair. 
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    The wife of the underworld Lord is a ceo
    General · dreamygurl7968
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  • Daoist807847
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    who is Turang? it's seems to be many characters name error in this book.

    "Well if you say so but I still can't believe how my daughter met that Gopez guy," Turang frowned. After meeting Andrew, he quickly rushed over to discuss it with Singtan bjt when they couldn't come to a conclusion, they called Zian to discuss and know about the whole thing.
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    Unexpected encounter:They were meant to be together
    Urban · Sofia05
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    character's mistakes here. should be Berry not Kimmy

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    Kiss Me Not
    Urban · Eustoma_Reyna
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    guilt

    Like an elementary student who just got caught cheating on a test, Lu Tian pout his lips in quilt.
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    Unexpected Second Chance at Love
    Urban · Abeehiltz
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    throat not threat

    Suddenly realizing how stupid she must have looked, Yue Ling cleared her threat and point to a few smaller boxes, "You can help me bring those boxes to the same room the wardrobes are in."
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    Unexpected Second Chance at Love
    Urban · Abeehiltz
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    i think it means oh god! not oh go

    Suddenly, her eyes shot widely open and cover her mouth as she gasp, 'Oh go! My grocery bags!!!'
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    Unexpected Second Chance at Love
    Urban · Abeehiltz
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    i think the author confused between sulked and suck

    Su Yuchen who came out from his shock also reciprocated to the kiss. He also sulked and licked her lips. Xin Mei, who was an expert after sharing kisses with Qian Fan, pushed her tongue in the mouth of Su Yuchen.
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    Handsome CEO'S Bewitching wife
    General · Vrinda13
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    i'm sure the word here is intimately not animatedly

    Xin Mei became more surprised when Qian Fan who was in a hurry only a minute ago, decided to stay for some time. Heart of Xin Mei pricked when she saw how animatedly Zhou Mingyu and Qian Fan were talking with one another.
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    Handsome CEO'S Bewitching wife
    General · Vrinda13
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    this is a waste of coins... it is repeated from the previous chapter...

    Ch 223 [Bonus chapter] HE HAD DONE THE DEED {4}
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    THE CEO's LOVE
    General · JoannaAngel05
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    please 🙏🙏🙏 check your typing error...

    Ch 291 Please Leave
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    The Typhoon's Wife
    Urban · har_k
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    too many typing error

    Ch 217 Are You Ready To Face The Past?
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    The Typhoon's Wife
    Urban · har_k
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    a lot of spelling and grammar mistake

    Ch 165 That First Meeting
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    The Typhoon's Wife
    Urban · har_k
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  • Daoist807847
    Daoist8078472yr
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    the real pprince ust be somewhere

    Ch 54 The Prince’s Den
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    Kiss Me Not
    Urban · Eustoma_Reyna
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