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ClemSama2mthCommentedwas thinking the same thing , kinda feel like a bother to do it with a shuriken instead of a kunai
Charles Doyle didn't reply. With a swift movement, he appeared in front of the man, clamped his hand over the man's mouth, preventing him from making a sound, and his other hand's shuriken lightly swept across the man's neck, quickly dispatching him.- ClemSama3mthCommented
AU i Guess because that's definitely not king backstory with him being a Lunarian & all
Brontes had never met King in person, only hearing of his formidable and cruel reputation. In the comics, King later became a notorious figure, the strongest of the Beasts Pirates under Kaido and the leader of the Three Disasters. - ClemSama4mthCommented
Mythical Zoan : Human Human Fruit Model Chuck Norris : Ultimate Fruit
What if it's a very powerful Akuma No Mi? Like the Water Logida... that I don't know if it exists, but it would be very OP in One Piece... or a Mythical Zoan of a deity like Zeus, Sun Wukong or Chuck Norris - ClemSama4mthCommented
exept its a logia not paramecia
The superhumans simply change their body structure. For example, Gasparde's Candy-Candy Fruit, although his body can transform into candy syrup, it cannot make candy, and the taste is also unpalatable. This has been personally verified by Luffy in an anime movie. - ClemSama4mthReplied to RaccoonLeague
The More reason to start now if it takes that long (original luffy do it in a year more or less) , your mc is a transmigrated , so that means he know of the plot & that haki is the supreme power of the world , there is absolutly no reason to delay it , i get the rokushiki fisrt because it strengthen the crew & himslef immediatly , this isn't something you can objectively justify author :-)
"That's good; I have 4 billion in the system; I can buy more special Devil Fruits for the crew... I could get the Haki manual, but no one will learn to use the techniques in the next few weeks, and I'll get more gold on Skypiea, so I prefer to strengthen the team with a power easier to obtain from a powerful Devil Fruit." Luffy smiled with this thought. - ClemSama4mthCommented
yes because dealing with enel without rubber or haki will be easy , i dont get his will to not learn haki now , it shoud be the top number 1 priority , can't rely on Yamato always , i so hope he gets trashed later because of that
"That's good; I have 4 billion in the system; I can buy more special Devil Fruits for the crew... I could get the Haki manual, but no one will learn to use the techniques in the next few weeks, and I'll get more gold on Skypiea, so I prefer to strengthen the team with a power easier to obtain from a powerful Devil Fruit." Luffy smiled with this thought. - ClemSama4mthCommented
nope , chapter is ok but doesn't fit in the story , just continue your original story , if you start over you open a door & will be tempted to do it again : result : you will never finish it , like maybe 90% of the fics created here , jutst stick with the orginal
Ch 90 Chapter 90 - Past. - ClemSama4mthCommented
continue , already 100 chaps ,
Option 2 - Continue as it is. - ClemSama5mthCommented
Big No , keep to one piece , there is absolutly no need to include other fic characs
[Option 2 - No?] - ClemSama5mthCommented
what about electro?
[Bepo] (Assistant) - ClemSama6mthCommented
was thinking the same thing as i read it , found the scene hilarious in Baki so its nice to imagine it with smoker
(If you have seen the series or read the manga, it is the same trick that Hanma Yujiro used against Baki). - ClemSama6mthCommented
what about military command ? how is that a body skill ?
[bodily skills]: strength = 20, agility = 30, endurance = 15, military command = 8 - ClemSama8mthCommented
Yep not much Help to not die from Physical Damages (Logia)
The only good thing was I was given the power of the Mera-Mera no mi in this life, but seeing as I had to figure out how to use it, and develop it, it wasn't much help at the moment seeing as I was too weak and too hungry to use it properly. - ClemSama8mthCommentedCh 144 Khalifa's Ambitions #144
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Nice story so far , i love the jtr template , Still not convinced by the nem ability its a little different from the volundrr and can be quite overpowered for asoif world but i am eager to see the follow up, can u for the next chap clarify the period in the timeline ,keep the good work!!!
This book has been deleted. - ClemSama9mthCommentedCh 144 The End
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Nice One author , too many fanfic are Straw Hat Friendly , its good to see changes , keep the good work
[…Were destroyed.]