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77 in 120min is a bit tight. It would mean that in average there was at least one slime in under 2 min walking distance which would make it impossible to properly seperate a group of slimes without encountering a new one. Mind you thats without considering the time for battling the slimes. Just a little detail I noticed, so far I like how he aproaches situations
No? Did i miss something while watching?
probably not sorry. since i have a 'real' job the progress has been kinda slow
still working on it
Absolutely love it so far Just a few chaps are out as of now but i love the ideal and the writing style so its 5 Stars for me
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Fun fact, while holding ace she really said Gol D. Ace
In the original ff Garp later took only Jackson for an extended time of training since Ace wouldn’t be able to keep up. Can’t it be more situational?
Cause I want to finish the story but at the same time don’t really want to continue it. Might sound strange can’t explain it well but the gist of it is that I thought it could help me
He wasn’t around when Garp took Ace and MC didn’t go around towns beating people and acting depressed. Didn’t mean to start discussing woulds and wouldn’ts in a ff since it’s all made up anyways but that were my thoughts behind that.