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End_boss11d agoCommented77 in 120min is a bit tight. It would mean that in average there was at least one slime in under 2 min walking distance which would make it impossible to properly seperate a group of slimes without encountering a new one. Mind you thats without considering the time for battling the slimes. Just a little detail I noticed, so far I like how he aproaches situations
This paragraph has been deleted.- End_bossa month agoCommented
No? Did i miss something while watching?
- End_bossa year agoReplied to ARSENAL_101
probably not sorry. since i have a 'real' job the progress has been kinda slow
- End_bossa year agoReplied to ARSENAL_101
still working on it
- End_bossa year agoPosted
Absolutely love it so far Just a few chaps are out as of now but i love the ideal and the writing style so its 5 Stars for me
- End_boss2 years agoReplied to dion_cole
Here
- End_boss2 years agoReplied to Ker_Lat
Fun fact, while holding ace she really said Gol D. Ace
- End_boss2 years agoReplied to SKAJ
In the original ff Garp later took only Jackson for an extended time of training since Ace wouldn’t be able to keep up. Can’t it be more situational?
- End_boss2 years agoReplied to SKAJ
Cause I want to finish the story but at the same time don’t really want to continue it. Might sound strange can’t explain it well but the gist of it is that I thought it could help me
- End_boss2 years agoReplied to
He wasn’t around when Garp took Ace and MC didn’t go around towns beating people and acting depressed. Didn’t mean to start discussing woulds and wouldn’ts in a ff since it’s all made up anyways but that were my thoughts behind that.
