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Absolutely love it so far Just a few chaps are out as of now but i love the ideal and the writing style so its 5 Stars for me

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Fun fact, while holding ace she really said Gol D. Ace

In the original ff Garp later took only Jackson for an extended time of training since Ace wouldn’t be able to keep up. Can’t it be more situational?

Cause I want to finish the story but at the same time don’t really want to continue it. Might sound strange can’t explain it well but the gist of it is that I thought it could help me

He wasn’t around when Garp took Ace and MC didn’t go around towns beating people and acting depressed. Didn’t mean to start discussing woulds and wouldn’ts in a ff since it’s all made up anyways but that were my thoughts behind that.

Just a few point but will focus more on grammar and such

Im keeping them until I finish the rewriting since people wished for them

Im rewriting the story in hopes it will help me to finish it. Old chaps are being reuploaded as aux chaps until I’m done with rewriting

Yeah just a tiny little problem popped up will have to wait till tomorrow night. Sorry for that