Great_Abby

Thanks for the chapter. This was quite the short one.

Eager for more! . . . . .

If the MC won't end up with Leah, I hope she will be killed by some vampire rather than breaking up since it really doesn't make sense for them to break up. Imprinting would be impossible since there really can't be any a choice better than Jaxon.

The writer was able to break the monotonous mood of twilight fanfic. Honestly, every other twilight fanfic is the same, but this one is vastly different. There is some drama but not overly so, no needless angst (at least not from MC side), and I'm looking forward to how he interacts with Bella since she was his Ex. Twilight is a psychological horror in my opinion, and I hope this story touch upon it.

Very eager to see more of this. The fact it is not a Cullen wank or bashing is cherry on top. MC minding his own business. Looking forward towards more of this.

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Glad you liked the idea👍

Bella romance as end pairing. Honestly? I rarely saw a Bella romance, even though it could be a great psychological insight into her past. For Bella, you can read into her character from different off handed things she say in the books. How she took of her childish mother, making sure the bills are paid, and cooking food. She has this self sacrificing hero complex. Her romance with Edward is all about how she sees good in him and wanting to 'fix him'. This is her personality, and when Edward said he couldn't read her mind, she asked if it's her own fault, hinting at a greater insecurity within her. Another instance of this is when she rides the motorcycle with Jacob, and when crashing into a rock and suffering a head injury and bleeding, she apologizes for being hurt. Yeah, a Bella's romance would go hard if MC calls her on this. You can kill Leah off somehow, maybe being killed by the three vampires, aka James and Victoria's coven? since it will be more believable than her imprinting on someone other than MC, and could cause some guilt in him since he knew about them but assumed the Cullen would handle them after Bella was hunted by James, instead Leah gets killed. Because let's be honest, imprinting is probably about getting the best offspring, and no one has better genes than the MC, so her imp on someone else other than MC is a bit ridiculous. And a friendly advice from someone who read many fics, never go for out of the blue drama, especially since Leah imprinting on someone other than the MC, would just push readers away, believe me.

Your review confused me gentleman. I see you point out what you think is wrong, but it is honestly seem real. If he wants to get to know someone, saying hello to them and greeting them is the least creepy option, plus they are young teens so they don't have to worry about social cues. He is 15, like the author said, how can he buy a house at that age? I also don't understand the issue with 15 and 17 years old, just 2 years apart, that's not an issue, no?

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