Bust_A_Cap

Thanks for the new chapters! I was really looking forward to reading this story🥳🎉, hope you're doing well author!!

Honestly I was excited to read this because it sounded interesting from the synopsis and the other reviews I read but man, I am 8 chapters in and I just can't continue it anymore. The story is so hard to follow because of how fast paced it is and the inability to create a clear picture of the events happening. I had high hope and I wish the best for the author if this is his first book but there just needs to be more structure and care for a story like this to shine.

Youre alive!!🙏🏼 Thanks for the chapter!🎉

This is turning into a mess, gone for days in the dungeon when he is still in school and says he can't miss classes, with no explanation on how thats okay. Then the cliche win against the demon and getting a power up, I wish it wasn't as troupe heavy and had some actual consequences or growth instead of making dumb decisions like entering the castle right after saying how he should be more careful and defeating a dangerous foe just like any other story😪

I got confused here, didn't he spend all his money already buying his weapon and equipment, like his 10k all spent on that but he still has 1.5k more for the entrance fee? Did I read wrong somewhere?

Omg! I think ive read the previous version of this story before and im soooo glad I found the newer version with more chapters at a constant speed! I really loved this story and I look forward to what you make or change in the future! Good luck author, im rooting for you!😁

This is a plagiarized story and does not deserve any power stones or support. The real author deserves the credit and recognition of creating a great story. Do not support this stolen work!

Seriously, when is this story gonna be made an anime or something, I can already see tons of interactions and panels with crinis, the queen and of course tiny 😂😂

Thank you for the chapter, really liking this story so far! Keep it up!!

I really am enjoying this book so far, it has flaws but overall I say this is worth a read at least. My main problem with this book is the over-explanation of the character, his motives, the world, and many other parts. I find that it takes me out of the moments a lot especially with so many coincidences happening all the time, gets a little predictable but I think it can improve as time goes on.