exactly

Thanks for the chapter, one thing that was uncomfortable to read and didn't add up was when he asked for the water and told her why he was asking for the water.

La idea del fanfic es muy buena, pero creo que falla en que es muy apresurado todo, hubo ocasiones en que tuve que leer varias veces para comprender, me da la impresión de que el autor escribía para si mismo y no pensaba desde la perspectiva del lector, creo que una reescritura le vendría bien.

regulation I hope that PJ learns to fight, first the friend and now the new boy at any moment receives a beating, he seemed like a very good person and quite naive until now. The rest is pretty good, the fanfic is solid.

good novel, pretty solid, but I hope you continue the iCarly fanfic, it was good and there are no fanfics for that show.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

Thanks for the chapter, I'm watching this after letting the chapters accumulate, so I don't remember the personality of the protagonist, but I felt it was silly.

Emma x Bas, no felton

Can you give me the link or tell me the name? because I looked for it with the same name as this fic but I couldn't find it

In the comments of the chapters where it is mentioned that she is pretty, you can find the image.

I think it's the best Marvel fanfic I've ever read, keep it up.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I don't know if I understood correctly what you wrote (I use a translator), but if I really understood then there is.

I have read up to chapter 622 and if it is not the best novel I have read, it is in the top 3 for sure, highly recommended.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Another chapter that I don't like, I feel like lately they're screwing with the MC like it's nothing and he can't/do anything in response, example: when they injected him to put him to sleep and right now in the interview, the interviewer forced him to speak in Spanish (bothering him ) and he still took a photo with her at the end, I feel like he's being too passive.

Ugh, I don't like being given orders like that or being drugged and I don't do anything, but at the same time I want him to continue acting in movies, dramas, etc. ( Traductor)

Does this have gender bender?

Ugh, well I got to chapter 25, between the fact that Grayfia is not in the harem and that you unnecessarily change the gender of the characters, since there are so many female characters, I didn't like it, good luck in the fanfic too. .

grayfia please to the harem

Grayfia has to be added to the harem, it's by law😆

Ugh, I'm curious why they did that to him now.

I feel like the characters lack personality, they feel empty. I recommend a novel of the same type so that you can improve and understand more, it is Versatile Superstar: Rise In Hollywood. I hope you don't take the criticism the wrong way, I'm telling you all this as a reader and because I feel it has a lot of potential.