I am not sure, if my english got better or worse thanks to this website.
Yes Whitebeard died like a Chad, but that does not mean MC should follow him so soon by relying on the Gura-Gura no mi to much. He did get Chakra Enhanced Strenght, but abit more variety in the use of his kekkei genkai or a weapon would be good. Since you like Whitebeard alot you would probably want him to get a Naginata too.
Yeah that worked out pretty well for him didn't it...
It was in the beginning of Chapter  ‚Recruiting Morgans‘, after he got the titans vitality.
It is from Black butler, the sickle of Undertaker.
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Rereading this is kinda painfull
Maybe I am wrong tho since im not that profound in english grammar, since english is not my native tongue.
Yes i am aware that it may become a common ability in your novel, althought it is not one yet, it would be ok to introduse someone like this. But since so far only the mc teleports, it sounded abit repeating to me , since you wrote paragraphs similar to this in the last few chapters. I also did not mean to say you shoul abandon 3rd POV‘s but such repeating phrases such as those two above, if you would leave them away for example it would still make perfect sense.
Unless you throw someone like thanos out of your next portal, you should stop telling us who is coming out two times like here. We can figure that out by the first paragraph alone and so far the only one able to use portals is the Mc, so saying whos coming out is unnecessary. Unless you do this to have a higher word count I would appreciate it, if you would leave those two paragraphs above and others like them out.
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Why didn‘t they use Hohō to step on air using reishi, I thought it was a common taught technique of soul reapers or at least the higher ranks like Kakashi ?