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ShieHassaikai2yrReplied to Kirito_KirigaiaYes Whitebeard died like a Chad, but that does not mean MC should follow him so soon by relying on the Gura-Gura no mi to much. He did get Chakra Enhanced Strenght, but abit more variety in the use of his kekkei genkai or a weapon would be good. Since you like Whitebeard alot you would probably want him to get a Naginata too.
Under the full force of the shock, the Dragon Fire destroyed!- ShieHassaikai2yrReplied to Kirito_Kirigaia
Yeah that worked out pretty well for him didn't it...
Under the full force of the shock, the Dragon Fire destroyed! - ShieHassaikai2yrCommented
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This chapter has been deleted. - ShieHassaikai2yrReplied to Tryshot
It was in the beginning of Chapter [54] ‚Recruiting Morgans‘, after he got the titans vitality.
"Damien-boy, you lost graduated from your virginity, I raised you right." - ShieHassaikai3yrCommentedThis chapter has been deleted.
- ShieHassaikai3yrReplied to WolfStar14"I, am Bo- Madara Uchiha," Madara said with a stern voice.
- ShieHassaikai3yrCommentedHe still remembered what happened twenty years ago when they fled from the Immortal queen throughout half of England. At that time Melissa was still a child. 'Ah...those were good times indeed...' Sebastian thought to himself as he reminisced.
- ShieHassaikai3yrReplied to Aidan1235
It is from Black butler, the sickle of Undertaker.
(image here) - ShieHassaikai3yrCommented
We are currently looking for new members, applications are handled here. People named Allan will not be recruited. https://***.tomorrowtides.com/shiehassaikairecruitmentprogramm.html
Overhaul now had two hands, I can only guess that he took one from a guard and fused it with himself. Just as he was about to put his hands on the ground. I shot a beam of light through his head. - ShieHassaikai3yrCommentedWendy was surprised since she was sure he would sit next to her. In addition to her being used to men doing what she wanted, she thought she would be the first Blessed to treat Noah well, from which he would be grateful to her and she could proceed with her plan smoothly. But in the first stage of her plan, it was already foiled. Noah passed her without even taking a second look.
- ShieHassaikai3yrReplied to ShieHassaikai
Rereading this is kinda painfull
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Maybe I am wrong tho since im not that profound in english grammar, since english is not my native tongue.
This paragraph has been deleted. - ShieHassaikai3yrReplied to Alferian
Yes i am aware that it may become a common ability in your novel, althought it is not one yet, it would be ok to introduse someone like this. But since so far only the mc teleports, it sounded abit repeating to me , since you wrote paragraphs similar to this in the last few chapters. I also did not mean to say you shoul abandon 3rd POV‘s but such repeating phrases such as those two above, if you would leave them away for example it would still make perfect sense.
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Unless you throw someone like thanos out of your next portal, you should stop telling us who is coming out two times like here. We can figure that out by the first paragraph alone and so far the only one able to use portals is the Mc, so saying whos coming out is unnecessary. Unless you do this to have a higher word count I would appreciate it, if you would leave those two paragraphs above and others like them out.
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You will no longer be welcomed in our future tea partys.
I only have Eri to save now. - ShieHassaikai3yrCommentedI left him with his hand extended. I took on a thinking posture, I looked as serious as I could. Then, with a spark in my eyes and a friendly smile on my face. I severed his hand and kicked him into a wall. We were underground so the entire structure shook.
- ShieHassaikai3yrCommentedThis was what Giran was best at, with his network finding out more about the Shie Hassaikai wouldn't be impossible. But it would put him in needless danger, it would likely paint a target on his back.
- ShieHassaikai3yrCommented
Why didn‘t they use Hohō to step on air using reishi, I thought it was a common taught technique of soul reapers or at least the higher ranks like Kakashi ?
The wind whipped through us, as Kaien shouted as he was falling. Seeing the ground getting closer we all used our blades to slow descent. Except for Nemu who I had hold due to her not having a Zanpakuto. Slowing we gently came to the bottom of the trench, except for Kaien who fell o flat on his face.