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MrAkillies1dCommentedCh 120 The White Walkers!- MrAkillies15dCommentedCh 23 Chapter 23: Sanyou Campaign '2'
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Eyo 😉
"Are you not going to pick that up?" - MrAkillies1mthCommentedCh 26 Chapter 25
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I like this, rules are made to bring order so this makes a lot of sense.
Kaylon felt his body again and understood what his seal consisted of. His divinity was still there, as was his omnipotence, but they were suppressed by the will of the world. If he wanted, he could remove that suppression at any time, but the cost would be not being able to descend to Genkai again. - MrAkillies1mthCommentedCh 102 Transformation!
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This development 👉👌is currently being cooked right author ???
"Bruce, let's talk about you for a moment, shall we? I've come to understand quite a bit about you. You're not just any young dragon; you're a fascinating individual who's barely crossed the threshold of his fourth year. And the mysteries that shroud you? Well, they're as deep as the caverns we dragons love to explore. At first, I was under the impression that the younglings within your domain were perhaps offsprings of some clandestine affair, or maybe descendants of another enslaved green dragon. But now, the truth unfolds—they are, in fact, your siblings." Weima's gaze was intense, piercing through the veils of presumption to seek the essence of Bruce. Bruce, with his robust and formidable frame, matched Weima in size, defying any notion that he was anything but a formidable presence. - MrAkillies1mthCommented
Kinda not loving where this is going I was hoping to get more character development for the Mc but all I'm getting is a lot of cliffhanger about something your trying to cook😔, BTW thnx for the chapter ❤️😭. Try not to involve more of shin and hyou, I'm here for the Mc not them🥰.
Ch 20 Chapter 20: Confusion - MrAkillies1mthReplied to Wingdash
He chosen strangers rather than family, there is no saving itachi here please 🙏, sorry itachi fan's 👎
And what about Sasuke, should he tell the truth to him, should he tell him that Itachi is innocent, how will the future change if he does so? - MrAkillies1mthCommented
Eyo what kind od treatment is this 😭☠️???
He has seen the anime, blondes have always given him trouble. Naruto, Shikamaru has to handle his office work after he took the Hokage position. Ino, throughout childhood that girl has been a pain in the ass and finally her dear future wife. Fu*k her, no no he means that he will never fu*k her or go near her. - MrAkillies1mthCommentedCh 60 Business Etiquette
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I think that u should implement time skip during traveling it will make the evolution of the fungus to different stages more realistic as no way they evolved this quick in the story so a time skip of 1 to 5 months of traveling would've been sufficient to explain the evolution plus after the skip I think that it's better u show more scenes of bonding and survival skill both of them are learning in the apocalypse to develop more of the story. A little mix of slice of life, romance and action would be nice.
Ch 14 Chapter 13 : Molotov Cocktail - MrAkillies1mthCommented
Thnx for the chapter, I hope the Mc would start focusing on more of his natural affinities in magic like the poison element (at the moment he only uses wind but he is a green dragon that is born with poison element why waste his potential ??? ), in fact you can try making him combine both the poison and wind. Example would be that any wind attack he does also causes poison. But regardless of what u decide I will support you author ❤️👍
Ch 93 Victory! - MrAkillies1mthCommented
It would've been great if ellie is the child of Sarah and Bruce. And they did not get united with Joel until the moment of the last of us game started. Alternatively they could also start the last of us by tracking down ellie that got separated from them and consiquently they found Joel with ellie??? Whatever choice u make would be interesting author. Thnx for the chapter❤️👍
Ch 13 Chapter 12 - MrAkillies1mthCommented
Xiao Ming should already be an uncle as he has 2 children already so it's kind of weird reading him as a brother type character as he also have young children plus this disciple of his are just lolis that means that the age is not that much older than his daughter so them calling him brother feels very weird to me. 🤔
Ch 591 Chapter 590: Mu Lingshan