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I don't see why it's amoral, personally I always hated Hancock, I don't see want people find interesting in her, she's the one who's amoral, furthermore he is practically a pirate, using other isn't a problem, he is already doing it with the women.
If you want to add them and know what to do with them then go ahead
I see no problem with that
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That's what you needed to do to ruin it for me, the system was the problem of this story exactly because I knew something like that would happen. Where is the MC choice in there, he decided to keep himself away from both of them, but his system tell him to choose, and he's just glad it gave him time??? In the beginning, you showed an MC that preferred his own feeling over the mission and only accepted because it would help him accomplish his dream, then you make him change like that for no reason (and no that's not some character development, that's plot forcing). I'm really sad you went that way, the story was great to read.
It's a translation, so I review the translation and not just the story alone. For the story it's not advanced enough, but It seems excellent compared to other Chinese FF, for now the MC isn't a hateful sociopath. The translation is perfect, I even had some doubt about whether it was translated or not, it's not just translated it's edited so no headaches. Full score for me! [img=recommend]
Joining the justice league is literally accepting to risk your life for people you don't know anything about, and in this case that aren't even from your world, and that seems dumb from someone who should priorities survival. And joining the league will force him to have interactions, which he isn't supposed to be good at but most likely the author will ignore that, the rest will go like every other FF, but I guess that's a question of point of view. Anyway, I already deleted this story I'm tired of those plot holes, so enjoy.
I don't think you understood me, I said he was a child because he came to a world that was not his, people from this world came to investigate, and he simply refused, then he complains about them running after him? I am not saying he should have surrendered, but he did it and the outcome was obvious, he thought he would come to another world and would get just stronger? For the rest of your message I agree but what does it have to do with it, he isn't really a hero, at least until he accepted this invitation.
Finally, I think that originally he wasn't supposed to escape the JL the first time and the author changed it because most people were annoyed by that, if you look in the chapter where he sees superman he is scared and cannot even move and in the next one no problem anymore. But he most likely already had a plan for the story, so the author did that, but it fells so forced.
Sorry but for me, it makes no sense he isn't a hero so the reason he tries to grow stronger is to be safe in this world. Then choosing a team of people that risk their lives every day is the dumbest thing to do, it's literary to put yourself in danger to be safe. Furthermore, the title is the survival of a loner, so personally I didn't want him to join any team at all, and he is here for only 6 months, and he can't accept bumping into them what is he a kid?