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I am unfortunately unable to do that at the moment, but for now, I will be trying to post 3 chapters on Monday, Wednesday, and Friday's.

Thank you for giving it a read. More chapters are coming soon. I plan on posting on Monday, Wednesday, and Friday, so keep an eye out.

Hey, guys! It's your new favourite Author. I just wanted to personally invite you to dive into the world of The Immortal's Disciple, following Alex on his adventure as he climbs the path of a cultivator. I wrote this story because I absolutely love a good cultivation novel. I love seeing a character start with nothing and, through sheer grit and a bit of god-tier luck and cheating, grow into an absolute legend. That's the journey I want to take you on. This isn't just a story about a guy getting OP, though. It's about an ordinary person trying to survive in a world where he doesn't belong. It's about the mystery of his powers. His "system" isn't a friendly blue screen with an AI, it's a cryptic force he has to figure out. Most importantly, this is a story about found family. Elara, Jay, and Lily aren't just here to cheer Alex on. They are his shield, his mentors, and his first real friends. Their journey is just as important as his. So, if you're looking for a story with a satisfying power curve, intense action, a deep mystery, and characters that feel like real friends, I promise you've found it. I'm releasing chapters regularly, and I love engaging with readers in the comments. So come say hi, and let's go on this adventure together. And I know it's a bit of a cheap move to give myself five stars, but once you give the story a read, you'll end up doing the same.

leaning might better here instead of lying

going to the cops wasn't a good idea and he was at least partially aware of that, but with a weapon he maybe wouldn't have to fear for his life if they send another "reminder". The best course of action he could have taken imo is trying to flee given that the government doesn't acknowledge his existence as we've seen it would have been relatively easy for his to just flee the country. Thanks for taking the time to respond, and again, it's a good story so far

I think it was a dumb idea to go to the cops and based on what was said about them earlier, he should know that they definitely won't do anything to help him. the story isn't bad, but I do think there were other routes that could have been taken like skipping town or obtaining a weapon of some kind for protection.

it's a wonder why that bill is so high if the TV is running 24/7

some famous last words

say it louder for the people in the back. "feel" could be referring to the burn of the smell, and that's how I understood.