I really like it. The story is awesome. Its very relatable on some poimta for me w/ the foster care and being separated from siblings the story's flow is nice I cant wait to see what Nate discovers and how she handles it and if her brother Max will be getting involved. This has a lot of potential w/ some minor editing and some more dialogue this will be a great book! I was hopimg for another chapter four wasn't enough I hopw you will check out my original works too Im always lookimg for any advice thats what we have to do for each other as authors so we can get better at what we love to do p.s pls update soon

Its pretty good the only downfall I have is that the speech isnt separated, when a character speaks its not on a separate line of its own its mixed in to the paragraph this makes it a bit confusing but the story is very eye catching I love it.

Its prtty good reminds me of when I was a kid being the oldest I told stories to but I got my butt whooped after 😆

I like how the story unfolds its modern take and yet different dimensional scifi it's really interesting. I definitely feel this has a lot of potential its soo good just needs to be edited a bit on some of the beginning parts but you still understand where it wasn't badly written. KEEP IT UP!

sooo good so far I really like it

This was really good honestly I like the concept so far. Your writing is nice the details are nice. I can keep up without getting lost.

Overall was a good reading. The book has potential my only conflict with it was it needed to be edited it was confusing with some of it. But overall I enjoyed it. There were lots of details and it caught my attention quickly.

I will be aiming to update 3 to 4xs a week. definitely ever monday and friday.

So far at where I'm at it's really good. It can get pretty relatable too. The story line has a nice flow not too complicated for you to follow. And I'm really rooting for my girl the mc she gets enough issues with just her mom alone to top it off w/ working hard in fashion and men to add to that. I love the small details too like the doreamon pajamas small details always keep me more interested in a story.

My mother was this annoying about grandchildren too now she has 3😂

Glad you liked it I will be adding a new update tonight

Thank you Im glad you enjoyed this one. The one I'm working on currently is The Kings Lost Fiance

me too lol it would be great to wear them while watching some anime

I would like a pair of doreamon pajamas as well who says adults have to be uppity and can't enjoy their childhood idols even if they are animes or cartoons. Shows we all have interests outside of work.

Love it.. I can relate as I am a night owl hate waking up early in the morning lol

Best comic/manga ever honestly but I really wish that Parker had his cubs first he should have been her first spouse he did an amazing job of taking care of her I hope Muir will be good and not hurt her cubs once they are born but I found it weird cuz Curtis said Parker was doing a horrible job at getting her pregnant so is it someone else or no ...