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Little_Sapling

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I'm gay. I don't normally shout if from rooftops so to speak, but I wrote it here to clarify that straight romance is tolerable for me, only if it's well written. So now you know why the low rating =)

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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
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    The main character is just so - damn - whiny !!! Gods does he ever juststop overthinking on these useless aspects of things. He's a bonafide coward and straight up unlikable. Whining about the miniscule amounts of work he has to do compared to literally every other nen user out there is pretty far from endearing. He's dumb too. I mean, his 'system' will allow him to create multiple nen abilities with extreme ease as his strenth progresses, but does he ever think to make them synergyse with eachother? No, he does not. He just wings it thb. Even then he still whines about having to actually think about what ability he wants his system to whip up for him. He's just such a loser. I can't help, but rant about it a little

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    Lord Of Hunters - Hunter X Hunter
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Commented
    Girl "During the Opening feast of this year, Headmaster Dumbledore warned us to not go there. He told us that we would die painfully if we go there."
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    Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Posted

    I cringed so hard reading this that I might actually have a headache now. A vain and 'pardon-my-french' retarted main character that the author so desperately wants people to think is actually interesting and charismatic, despite EVERY. SINGLE. DIALOGUE. saying otherwise. Awful vocabulary. Awful grammar. Awful pacing. Awful settings and extreme OOC from beloved characters. The only reason I even bothered leaving a review is because this work has a much higher rating then it deserves.

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    Harry Potter A New Story
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Commented

    Well that came out of nowhere. I cringed so hard I might actually have a headache now.

    "well, glad that you are in the same house with us. you are very interesting to talk to," said Cho.
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    Harry Potter A New Story
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Posted

    It is generic to the point that it becomes boring. In essence, the protagonist replacing our favourite Uzumaki is statedly a master manipulator and schemer of sorts. Unfortunately, in every dialogue he is the very picture of your average 12 year old otaku. Reading it gives me second-hand embarrassment. On the other hand, the moments where he's under the pretext of manipulating people, it's so blatantly and painfully obvious, that all the believability and immersion is gone. It hits all predictable tropes in such a manner that by reading a few chapters you'll already have a rough outline on everything that'll happen from that point on, namely most "issues" and plot points he'll want to change being discribed as following: "Hello, nice to meet you. I'm Naruto. You should/shouldn't do, think or be this way. I'm a genius and smart, so you should follow my advice." "Oh okay, you are now my best friend.". This story loves to pretend that its characters aren't humans with complex desires and intricate personalities, but NPC's with preprogrammed responses. In the end, I think it lacks passion. I've realised I'm ranting now. It's most likely because I'm tired of reading these stories where the protagonist is supposed to be a genius, but thinks and talks like. an. idiot! 2,8 out of 5 and that's only because it is on WebNovel.com.

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    Naruto: The Shinobi Genius
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Commented

    Screw you despicable author! stop making me laugh at dumb shizzle like this

    The two Uchiha were throwing shuriken in the most bullshit way possible at one of their clan's exclusive training sites. It wasn't the most comfortable place to be, but when you were living in a village full of paranoid ninjas and you wanted some privacy, you didn't have that many fancy options. The sun had already begun to set providing the perfect occasion for an emotional conversation between two popular characters. It is obvious that this place will reappear in dozens of flashbacks, giving the trees more screen time than Ten-Ten.
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    Sasuke Uchiha's guide to an unhealthy ninja life
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Posted

    I laughed a bunch reading this. Thanks man xoxo Ignore whatever I'm writing here, I need the word count. For all that, I am pretty sure you read this anyways dumbass

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    Sasuke Uchiha's guide to an unhealthy ninja life
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Commented

    yes, just ...yes

    "It's not that. It's just that the idea of having harem sounds like a nightmare. Do you know how exhausting it is to maintain a healthy romantic relationship with ONE person? I don't even want to imagine the amount of stress I would experience if I try to increase that number. I guess it's normal for you to think that harems are great since you've never had been in a relationship."
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    Sasuke Uchiha's guide to an unhealthy ninja life
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Commented

    This entire paragraph had me giggling!

    Funny enough, despite insulting her every other sentence, Neji was still the kindest teacher she had ever had. His crude words were practically the greatest positive reinforcement anyone has given her since her third birthday party (a birthday party that she spent complety alone eating her cake by herself...and the one that gave the compliment was her own reflection on mirror). If she ever failed to perform a technique, Neji would frown and berate her a little before showing her the right way to do it while throwing an insult every now and then. It was still much better than the usual ¨You are a greater disappointment to the clan than your armless granduncle¨ and ¨I refuse to believe that such a disappointment came from my seed.¨. In hindsight, that was a bit sad.
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    Sasuke Uchiha's guide to an unhealthy ninja life
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Commented

    I'm embarrassed that this one got a chuckle out of me imagining Sasuke saying this.

    Uchiha Stronkest! Sharingan Number One!
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    Naruto- Evil Eyes (Sasuke SI)
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Posted

    I have a whole lot to say about this fic, but nobody wants to read long ass paragraphs for a review, so here you go: Things I like about the fic : + it's written in a summarized way that I felt smooth and enjoyable to read + a cool headed protagonist, plans well and is clearly partly sociopathic + the author has included romance, but very limited and superficial + the grammar and descriptions are suprisingly good in some parts + magic power is cultivated similar to chinese cultivation novels + a healthy dose of face slapping and scheming + the story has an undertone of extreme rationality that agrees w me + no romance with very underage girls (thank god) + he hides his power as much as possible (a personal preference) + the author basically time-skips to the 4th HP book (I prefer this) Things I dislike about the fic : + my main issue is that the protagonist overexplains his though process to other characters through conversation; it lets us, the audience, in on his reasoning, but would be very akward and patronizing during an actual conversation; it gives me second hand embarrassment + the grammar and descriptions are suprisingly mediocre in other parts + it very often feels as though everything is too convenient for the protagonist and a lot of plot issues that progress the story solve themselves that way (e.g. he finds a ritual in his family library that unlike other rituals doesn't require personal sacrifice right when he needed it) + the romantic interactions are terrible, but the author is likely aware it is not his forté + it is admittedly a bit too smooth sailing for the protagonist These are just my personal thoughts. I thought it was great for WebNovel.com standards and therefore gave it 4 stars. On fanfiction.net though the standards are higher and the scores would be lower. Like if you think this is useful! See ya!! xoxo

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    Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Posted

    An excellent hunter x hunter fanfiction. The hatsu are incredibly well done too. So many authors just take it as if just any conditions will suffice when creating a hatsu and that they can abuse loopholes. To me, nen doesn't work like that, so well done.

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    My Researching Journey (HxH)
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Posted

    What a banger!! I love your main character. For me that is a welcome surprise. I usually find it hard to relate to non-reincarnated male leads in 'My Hero Academia'-fanfictions. (Most likely because teenagers are more often then not quite annoying in my opinion. They are cesspools of hormones and insecurities with an incessant need to be liked. Going through puberty once was quite enough thank you very much.)

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    Mha: Aegis the Shield Hero
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Commented

    Surprisingly, this is actually just an old wives tale. Not true at all.

    "Nuh-uh. Exercising at an early age can be bad for your growth. Hmm... Inasa has been interested in exercising too... Alright! I've decided! I'm going to convince Big Sis to let you spend the summer break at our house so that I can oversee both of your exercises!" he stated with a thumbs up.
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    MHA: Air Supremacy
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Posted

    I most enjoyed the chapters from the dark continent exploration arc. I didn't expect myself to enjoy any 'interpretation' not put together by Togashi. Aaand I've achieved the neccecary word count to post a review. Cheers

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    My Researching Journey (HxH)
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Replied to Aerobix10

    Hello. If you're satisfied with reading a relatively good translation of this exact novel, you may find it under the following link: https://novelsemperor.com/fairy-tail-i-can-grow-bigger-and-smaller-chapter-001/ Currently there are 302 well translated chapters. Please leave a like so this comment is more visible to others. Cheers.

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    Fairy Tail: Brandish’s Magic!
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Replied to HeavenlyDemonSaint

    Hello. If you're satisfied with reading a relatively good translation of this exact novel, you may find it under the following link: https://novelsemperor.com/fairy-tail-i-can-grow-bigger-and-smaller-chapter-001/ Currently there are 302 well translated chapters. Please leave a like so this comment is more visible to others. Cheers.

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    Fairy Tail: Brandish’s Magic!
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Replied to AshuraMikoto

    Hello. If you're satisfied with reading a relatively good translation of this exact novel, you may find it under the following link: https://novelsemperor.com/fairy-tail-i-can-grow-bigger-and-smaller-chapter-001/ Currently there are 302 well translated chapters. Please leave a like so this comment is more visible to others. Cheers.

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    Fairy Tail: Brandish’s Magic!
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Posted

    Hello. If you're satisfied with reading a relatively good translation of this exact novel, you may find it under the following link: https://novelsemperor.com/fairy-tail-i-can-grow-bigger-and-smaller-chapter-001/ Currently there are 302 well translated chapters. Please leave a like so this comment is more visible to others. Cheers.

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    Fairy Tail: Brandish’s Magic!
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  • Little_Sapling
    Little_Sapling1yr
    Replied to HeavenlyDemonSaint

    https://novelsemperor.com/fairy-tail-i-can-grow-bigger-and-smaller-chapter-001/ Mtl full chapters

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