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Saigium1yrReplied to Almost_AprilIt's just a theory. One made before reading on in chapters. And had been shown to be false. lol Happy reading!! lol
Lith and Orion went to dinner together, still talking about any trivia Orion could remember about Menadion. Lith was likely to have already got her tower, Menadion's Fury, the prized Forgemastering hammer, would have been a fine addition to his collection.- Saigium1yrReplied to timothyfg6
Knowing when to apply self preservation is paramount when in an hostile environment. i.e. since he doesn't know the world yet, then self preservation is essential to staying alive.
Yet he had to make mistakes. Achieving perfection from day one would have been too eye-catching. - Saigium1yrReplied to Anubesetesh
Thus the difference of those with intelligence, when those that don't know their limits encounter something new, and with a troubled past, they view it as a wall. Because no one has ever been a guiding hand for them and never had the encouragement from true intelligent others. Thus his dejection, since he never knew his intelligence level and only applied to saving his brother. He never cared for another else than what was before him at the time. This "poisonous pill" happens too often in those with higher i.q.'s due to the persona of Humanities Will.
'I know, but practice is not all. This seems a discipline that requires quite a lot of talent, and we both know I am no genius. Invigoration and true magic cannot help me like they do for Forgemastering and Healing. I'm afraid I have just hit a wall.' - Saigium1yrReplied to Paul_Tye
Sometimes people need to learn that there are emany types of introverts and extroverts. Everyone is different and people should be more understanding of that.
It was without a doubt the worst day of the year for Lith. He would be forced to spend the full afternoon away from home, surrounded by complete strangers, and robbed of any privacy or personal space during the festivities. - Saigium1yrCommented
Hence "My Bad" lolol
He tossed the fox who was enjoying his warm and cozy hug onto the ground and got out of bed with an aim. It was time to do some work and old-fashioned fighting. - Saigium1yrCommented
No named characters equals a bad sign about to happen. >.>
"Thank you," Liam said as he crouched next to her. "What is your name?" He smiled and poked the cheeks of the doll-like girl. - Saigium1yrReplied to Blanket
Technically, stranger Sanger was the worse thing psychologically we have done for children. Walking in pairs and pointing at a supposed creep. It was proven on numerous studies, and even taken as far as predators up their game to taking more than one child. I don't mean to cause alarm just felt it was necessary to let you be aware. Stranger Danger was and is obsolete.
They laughed and chatted about the events that had been terrifying just a while ago. More importantly, they thanked their lucky stars that they decided to move here based on a whim, trusting a stranger they had met online. - Saigium1yrCommented
Sword and ...
An item fell out from the mouth of the creature. - Saigium1yrReplied to Yolohy
In the world of Physics. Worlds are compared to footballs and moons a tennis balls. Throw a tennis ball that's attached to the football across a field. and you will see how planetary systems twirl in space. Courtesy of Brian S. Greene for the analogy.
Liam winced from the gut-wrenching pain, but he held on strongly to the huge football-sized dragon soul swirling in front of him. This was where he was previously interrupted, and now he was going to forge this soul to perfection. - Saigium1yrCommented
"lose" editors note.
"Ohh, I love people who put up a fight, I love to see their faces when they loss an arm or two, hahaha" the beast laughed. - Saigium1yrCommented
Another soul will bite the dust.
As for the player whom he had backstabbed, he couldn't give two shits about that loser. - Saigium1yrCommented
"I am pretty hungry" editors note.
"Hey Leia, we should train a little before the sun goes down, I pretty hungry" Sofia said making a sad face. - Saigium1yrCommented
Editors note: "pierced".
One of the arrows priced his leg when he nearly reached the other end of the room and crashed into the book. His pet licked his face as he sat up. - Saigium1yrCommented
Capitalize "It" after period, or grammar fix with comma.
A white light appeared and It covered his body like a cocoon. Ray felt warm energy cover him. it felt comfortable contrary to his convulsing muscles and injuries. He didn't feel pain at all. - Saigium1yrCommented
Great job so far! Although a good starter to a paragraph, I'm not a fan of repeated text in a book. It breaks up the feel of natural flow to reading. But thank you so far for not doing a harem!
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Yeah, I was wondering that myself.
<Congratulations, player Xuan! You have broken through to the Seventh-Layer of the Flowing Qi Stage!> - Saigium1yrCommented
Ha, I'd go with STR. AGI, INT, and Luck. Outwit and out maneuver opponents.
[LUC: 10 -> 10 (Cost: 0 SP)] - Saigium1yrCommented
Why is he suddenly smoking now? This is the first it's mentioned, I believe though I could be wrong.
He took another long drag from the cigarette when a pair of warm hands wrapped around him from the back. "Liam, are you okay?" It was Shen Yue's voice. - Saigium1yrCommented
Editors Note: "grin on "his" face."
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Editors Note: "Zach"
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