sorry this one is kinda bad so far

hey bud just wanted to let you know tarble vegeta's little brother is cannon he is mentioned briefly in super by vegeta although he doesn't really matter in the grand scheme of things lol he's stronger than raditz and nappa though

ok so now I'm confused if he's around the same age as shisui he's only a year or two older than itachi he's way younger than Tsunade who is hashiramas granddaughter itachi is around 19 years old in the start of cannon

I haven't read it yet but this dude is madaras grandson? I'm curious does he go to school with Tsunade and jiraya and orochi? that should be about his age unless madara had him while he was an old man attached to the gheddo statue I will read a bit to find out though. I gave you a full rating because writing books isn't easy by any means tbh be easy bud

jutsus can harm a logia user op is not even remotely close to being higher tiered power scaling than naruto

suigetsu is water bodied because of experiments done by orochimaru lol you actually see his brother reanimated and fighting tis the white haired sharp teethed dude from the 7 swordsman

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story seems interesting but I'm having.mini anurisms trying to.follow it

bet I gave u two power stones as I was finishing what you had left hope you continue

it's a good book man if you come back would be dope like most of the others I was waiting for more chapters

Raichu is still one of the faster pokemon even evolved immediately just saying

I mean almost all the older games had mute mcs but they technically talked we just never saw what they said