Nice chapter! Thank god he wont have to go through another 20 floors, I wouldnt be able to sit through it tbh. Liked the fox, it makes a good addition to the party lol.

Alright gonna spoil some stuff, but here’s my honest thoughts. The first few beginning chapters I didn’t think I’d be able to get through. The POV shifts constantly, the grammar is poor, and even the character names are inconsistent. For example when the MC is in the adventurers guild, the clerk helping him tells him her name, Claire. Then the MC just goes “thanks Sara”. I honestly thought this was a joke, but it wasn’t even mentioned after that. I am glad I kept reading after the first few chapters though. The part where the MC joins the army by accident is very nice. I unexpectedly enjoyed it a lot and haven’t seen anything like it in an isekai before. The pacing and story are decent and actually held my attention, which is a rarity for something on webnovel. When the MC trains at the army with Sona and Tashin, I found the logistics a bit weird but it might just be me. Besides having an aid, why did Tashin go so far to teach the MC magic? He didn’t have much to gain from it and it felt like the MC was being singled out despite going on and on about how he didn’t want to be special. Same with Sona, her motive of seeing something in him is rather weak, why doesn’t she have other apprentices and train him alongside them? The two year part where the MC was being trained by Sona is also kind of weird. The pacing is way too fast and we skip over a lot of his growth. As soon as that part of the story is done he’s suddenly really good at fighting low-tier adventurers? I mean that’s fine and all but why not have more battles along the way that display his progress? Just so we can see a tiny piece of that growth. The latest few chapters where the MC is in the dungeon however, I kinda dislike. In all honesty, the pacing is absolutely terrible. I think most would get bored after several floors but skipping like eight floors at once and summarizing four in the same paragraph? I didn’t enjoy that. I think it was good to give a summary of them, but doing entire stories for the first two floors and then skipping ahead all at once really threw me off. Maybe shortening the floors would be better and then only summarizing a few? Obviously seeing the MC struggle is important, but seeing the same formula of battle over and over is boring. Those were my thoughts so far, I’ll keep reading since despite the obvious pacing flaws, the story in general is good. I think some of it should be reworked a little bit to be more cohesive but otherwise it kept me engaged most of the time. Would I recommend it to people? Probably not, this story has way too many flaws, but I think it has a strong foundation and it seems to have gotten better slightly in recent chapters so I guess theres that.

Lo siento, no sé español, así que esto podría ser un poco extraño. El caos no es originalmente mi personaje, aparecen por primera vez en el mito de la creación griega de Hesíodo. Después de eso, nunca vuelven a aparecer, por lo que se supone que están durmiendo mientras se crea el universo entero. Es más probable que sean tratados como un objeto similar, un abismo, en lugar de un personaje. Entonces, teniendo en cuenta que el Caos no se desarrolla mientras estoy dormido, si realmente lo hiciera para que sean más similares a un dios, entonces esto sería todo. Por supuesto, había considerado hacerlos todopoderosos y conocedores, pero esa no sería una historia divertida. El caos comienza como un personaje dominado, por lo que la limitación es esencial para el desarrollo del personaje.

As I’ve said at the beginning of the story, they promised themselves to not use a lot of their powers. (Currently at the level of a weak demigod) Thus doing some form of mind manipulation would break that. Their entire motivation for living on Earth is to be able to experience life as a human and travel. That includes the powerlessness sometimes when being human. Also they are close with they’re parents so they wouldn’t not talk to them about this to begin with because they want to be transparent about almost everything with them.

(Sorry for long answer, I don’t know how to answer this well.) I’m honestly not sure yet. Probably not Leah as they think of her as a friend but I don’t want to force any kind of romance. I feel like their character would probably have very close friends and not a romantic partner, due to the eon long age gap. Though that’s what I thought at the start but now I’m not sure. I think it would be better to wait as the story develops and maybe I can add something in. I just don’t want fans to pick and have the character’s feelings feel forced.

I binge read this story all at once and it is amazing. It has a few spelling errors here and there but not enough to make you want to quit reading it. The character development of all of the characters is fantastic and the author’s ocs intergrate seamlessly with the world of Harry Potter. Obviously it has its flaws, as all stories do, but it’s definitely worth reading.