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Author I must say you are doing a bit too much... tension and conflict indeed make a story better but making Mo an enemy to all kind is he really your protagonist or just someone created for you to bully letting him overcome only so you can bully him some more
I dead ass responded to this right after it was written idky it disappeared but the short version of my reply is i wasn't talking about Lin Jing but about Bai Qing
i mean with a billion you can quit your job n count money for the rest of your days
months and Xinyu still hasn't spent no time with him because these 2 girls now I actually have to agree they deserve to be called brats that's insane...I wish my fiance would dare try me like that it's madness
didn't he previously say he needed dragon balls
Those aren't even their kids even without the sex which isn't the most important issue imagine being forced to be lonely by your significant other in your own home because you decided to save two people that's wild ish especially with all you've done for them including your significant other mind you this after you've been regarded as a pervert n lecher with no apology before being left in the cold even with the temper he has Fang is clearly too nice for his own good
I was referring to Bai Qing... at the moment he's with the Ling family which is his family but before he can actually spend time with them it's interrupted by Bai Qing challenging Lin Jing
how funny how there's no apology for wronging him but now suggesting to keep the girls
Good story simple and satisfying with just enough op behavior to make me happy
Really now you gon write it so even the f'in sect master is gonna surpress him that's bs he got hella enemies already you can make his next one from even somewhere as powerful as the central land but his own sect master damn you're cruel man